the second e is to squished up you should make it relatively the sae size as the first e and the r needs a bi of work around the part where you bring it back into itself and have it bend or whatever.
yea i know i was really ripped and already outlined it by the time i noticed it thx for the crits tho
this is dope work, although the last two letters are hard to read and poorly constructed. keep it up gene, lose the bar through the G and make the top of the G longer, get used to letters before you try to add to them
sanc - nice fill chip daniels - do simples desipher- nice style..whats with the hole in the middle?? (i suck at giving crits) new shit [Broken External Image]:http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/3787/jerse.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/8493/brun.jpg
honestly idk. you have really dope letters but you only ever pop out two. and it buggs me because they are dope letters. make sense? i kinda think youre afraid to leave you comfort zone. and hopefully this pusshes you. because i'm a pusher. i push people. and by the way i really never post stuff that i don't like so take it easy on me. they are sketchy sketches. :/. trying to figure out how to handle wild style. its kinda hard.
She's trying to look tough in this picture haha (btw- i'm not in this pic. the other kid is my friend) [Broken External Image]:http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs44/f/2009/152/b/b/Melissa_by_Rhino_fish.jpg Anyway, I had a great afternoon [Broken External Image]:http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/5984/thumbsuptu.jpg
I'd Tap....Then agian....Yeah I'd tap. [Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan-6.jpg ^^^^Sketch I did today in class while studin for a final. But I need advice on my flow cause its a bit weak. Also fuckin around with a new R. I'll have Indiviual sketches up later.... ^^^^^Single Sketch R Crits CanControl- Your in MDC? Well your style is unique in the fact that its original. The Arrows about the K I think could use some attaching but that just me it looks like they come out of the cut as I would say. you know. Eski- Paint On a girls Tits and their you go you made it lol Jers- Yeah man your R is a lil weak compaired to your others....Try doing single letters sketches....I go through the same thing.... Gene- go to the Toy bb thread... Desi- Only thing Im not feeling is the Scruched up letters but other than that fresh.
did you do that augor 'r' contest? and yea i think i'm still in there? hahah. homeboy asked if i wanted to be in and i said yea. he told me to send flicks of work i did for the cru but i still haven't so hahahaha. but i deffinatly did some work.
Naw man Im not that good. I dont even know what site its on. but word man stay up MDC is pretty nice, I know a couple ppl from their.