@shearz - some of the ideas are nice but i dont think its working overall. I didn't realize that was a Z until i kept staring intensely, and those wavy bar - vein things connecting letters looks awkward. hate to say it but, try some simples. @ cred - i wasn't feeling that as much as your other stuff, i think its all starting to get super super clean though @ doss - i kind of get what you mean, but just ignore it if you don't care, no need to bring it up. @ kinger - from seeing some of your other posts i can only say, take everything you know - and completely forget it. @ toys - the shading and detail looks nice on that first post, but you should try more simples - or do whatever.
There is an entire thread dedicated to this very thing (new to Graffiti). No one is going to hold your hand while you try to figure out your own shit.... I'm not gonna help you climb the ladder I'm too busy climbing mine type shit. You might get some tips as to why something doesn't work etc, but when you haven't even tried to grasp the basics and it stands out like a blind man at a nude beach and talk about wanting tips and then about not giving a shit what people say no one is going to take you seriously and frankly your drawing should be deleted at that point or you should just stop posting. If you want tips take them and take the time to educate yourself. CRED is doing it and shows like a mother fucker. Best tip you will ever get. SHUT THE FUCK UP AND DRAW.
@PETER aside from my little alcohol induced ledge moment, i can't agree more with your final statement.
anybody help me with a name that starts with an A? @shears - try gaining some structure. some of your swoops look off. the shading is kind of all over the place. think of a light source and direction. like have it all on one side. not imploding everywhere. just my 2 cents
@seder - try adding some funk to your letters. get some more style going in there. those fills are sick tho
Seder the bottom ones pretty cool, im not so sure about the top one haha. But its still good. The only thing is the right leg of that R got wicked fat on the bottom one
failure for the NOLA battle, character doesnt fit at all, gonna drop characters for a little while and concentrate on letters and better connections View attachment 622215
Shears Ir shading and 3d are off. Area dope letters but the r looks a bit small. Seder that first one is sick why not try something a lil harder u make that look 2 easy. Hipsterpunk u r to good for toy section IMO advance
Thanks for feedback, looking back, I am hating that piece so much, it was like 1 in the mourning so oh well, thanks.
Ahh trying different styles, is this one better then the last? When markers come I might colour this one..