still looks the same put more ephasis on the straight line in the b

 

the top part of the b?

 

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def not on point but i feel ok about it, thoughts?

 

I like it but I'd see about maybe making the top bar of the f a bit more pronounced and fucking around with the u's and c's some more

 

Never down with a star or any sort of hash mark or line for a hole in letters like o and p.

 

Yea my U's came out pretty bad, the C isnt quite right either. You're right about the F needing emphasis on the top cause mori thinks its a P haha.

And mori i feel you about the *, but if you don't like stars or lines what do you use for the holes? strictly dots or circles and faces?

 

I usually rock a hollowed out 'o' with a drop shadow in the open space. But don't get me wrong, its a personal pref. I can digg your style home boy. I just think * can be used as a cop out for a otherwise dope letter, ya know?

 

I havent been here for awhile.. but ive been still toy bombing. Any thoughts and feedback would be great

 

If I'm not mistaken I recall you.... and if my memory serves me right you've gotten better. Keep fuckin' with 3 and 4. Relax with some of the highlights it's a bit of an over kill. some of your stuff is a little wobbly and out of proportion.... like the R's in 2 and 3.

 

That 3rd one looks ok, not a throw but its good compared to your other shit. On the top 2 you're doing bubble styles for the ER but bar type ish on the VT, conform that shit. Look at some throws on flickr or something, usually they're 1 or 2 lines per letter, just go with that for now and keep the whole thing simple. btw I've only ever seen 3 guys who can rock a shine in their throws and not look like trash.

 

my entry for next weeks throw battle

Jints throwie battle by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

 

diggen them colors^ think you should work on the d' more tho

 

Thanks for the crits dude !

 

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crits?

 

i think that this looks more on the piece side,becuz it took u awhile and it doesnt look very rushede,its pretty good very nice fill

 

fired.

naked. the full name joints are solid. I'm with Gemer on the D. progressing nicely.

 

Try to keep throwies simple. Practice some more, i liked your handstyle but this one isn't that good.
I will drop a throwie on this page when i'm at home.

 

Get to class, tot.

 

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