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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ViniVidiVici

    ViniVidiVici Senior Member

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    Extinct - I like it, alot, it's pretty dope the letter structure and the fill is sweet, I really really like the A and N

    Wordsmyth - I like the general idea, like the style you are going for but the R is a little weak, the leg coming off it is too short and looks like a peg leg, and whatever that letter is after the T try cleaning it up and changing it up, cuz that part needs some work, but like I said before, I really am digging that style.

    Moner - I always like your shit, always nice, that E is whack on the first one, and the N does look like an R, with the second one I just like it hahaha. Also I'm in love with that Karak

    WGONE - Dope, that is all, dope.... nice connections and extensions, perfect colors, good structures.... dope


    This page is looking good for it being the toy section, I have some shit I'll be posting up soon.... been real busy with school and all, Orgo is trying to fuck me over, but I'm gonna show that bitch what's what.
     
  2. thepekins

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  3. PegCityBoy

    PegCityBoy Senior Member

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  4. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    ai277.photobucket.com_albums_kk69_flyffm4ner_217.jpg
    someone said work with pencils.
     
  5. W_G_O_N_E

    W_G_O_N_E Elite Member

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  6. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Or use a copy machine...
     
  7. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    bump, end page crits please
     
  8. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    looks bad lose drips and connections. Do normal letters

    wgone- dope!
     
  9. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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    Why the fuck would you bump the shit on the same damn page?
    Just for that I'm not helping you out with shit.

    Wgone, though, that top shit is pretty dope.
     
  10. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    it is normal letter holy hell... I'm not just gunna sit there and draw letters off of my keyboard, I have a full binder of that already, It's time to add shit like that too it, I don't see why its so fucking bad as you proclaim

    good for you
     
  11. *Patch!

    *Patch! Senior Member

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    simples can look fresh even without extensions or anything. Youre doing too much and it just isnt working out
     
  12. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Pimp shit I am diggin the top one bro it really stands out...
    @EXI: You need to start way simple bro

    a piece I am working on
    ai937.photobucket.com_albums_ad220_Albinoethiopian07_1010002332.jpg
     
  13. SYFER1

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  14. SicK-

    SicK- Senior Member

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    You need to calm down bro. dont ask for crits and get pissed when you get em. Just keep doing simple letters, style comes over time not in a few weeks. Look at Wgone's shit its awesome and its still simple.

    And heres my crit for your work. The letters look real shaky take your time for now on, lose all those silly ass drips and connections, and work on your bar width try and keep your letters all the same width.
     
  15. sziv

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    ai55.tinypic.com_jq18ye.jpg
    one of my old ones , critz????
     
  16. RedEyes

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  17. FuckTheFame

    FuckTheFame Elite Member

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    @exi - you need more structure man. try messing around with some fills
    they can normally get the creative juices flowing
    especially if your still new to it
    and try to remember to keep your lines straight
    they look a little wobbly

    (that syfer above is a good example of structure)

    red eyes - noice. digging the forcefield and two tone

    mogan - your chars are ill. the shading on the shirt is legit
     
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  18. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    its bad because you cant draw a straight line. The 3d is way off and the drips look like some nasty poopies... and what is the last letter supposed to be? Don't draw keyboard letters anymore, add some curves and shit and change the volume of the letters and stuff. Go to the new to graffiti thread and look at the shit about bars. If you cant realize that it looks horrible then you wont get better. damn


    maybe someone could crit my stuff at the top of da page
     
  19. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    theres already a dude wayyyy up that writes syfer

    and yo bumz...im feelin that..good shit
     
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  20. WoRdSmYtH

    WoRdSmYtH Guest

    @ thepekins, I'm diggin' that last piece in yellow, but I would remove that little add on you've got on the inside of the 'O'. None of the other letters has anything like that so it just looks out of place. But I like your drips and your yellow fill/outline. Letter structure is pretty good. The other two I'm not feelin' so much but I like the 'E's for both and the 'S' on the first one. Also, notice how in the 3rd one you've squished your letters together. I think the spacing between letters in the first one ruins it. As far as the second one goes, I'm just not feelin' the letters, especially the 'S'. Too many straight bars. Just my opinion anyways, not bad, just keep practicing.