guess im just another toy

 

how you feel about savors throw

 

then do it where nobody can see your trash

 

this is called the toys forum for a reason

 

that was also a older throwie i have changed my still much since i started to paint on walls

 

2pac is the truth not the throw the actual 2pac.... do some research alli and bama on graff then start completely over on paper.

 

bama and alli - be humble and listen to people that have more skill than you, they want to see decent graffiti as well as you do,

 

the only thing that COULD be worth working on is that spokane throw, obama...
both you and 2pac aren't ready to be holding any cans yet, practice harddddddd now, party later

 

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Bump for crits

 

can control is nice, but i'd have a go at doing the outline faster to make it more accentuated/bubbly/wild-ish? cant really describe what i mean but it sort of looks like it took you a while to do, also dont put those bubbles in again, never go more that a line forcefield on a throw imo, i normally just do fill and outline,

edit, enter this for a bit of fee back, was told my throw style is similar to some one so tried to take it a few steps back, any thoughs?? looking at the flick the 3d looks shit, damn
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I prefer drop shadows on throws personally think they look better. Not much I can find to crit gpers that is a good lookin throw, I really dig it.

 

Pretty solid, I'm getting frustrated with my throw to be honest.

 

Crits?

 

what do u guys think about the savor throw.
thats myn. me and bama paint together thats why he posed it

 

Throwie

hows this?

 

crits?

 

hahaha thanks for the help. We all start off somewhere, i still got alot to learn..

 

I think I get what's ur saying about speeding the outline up. Ur right I did spend a fair amount of time on the throw, mainly becuz It was chill and wanted it to look decent. The bubbles were to help cover my old throw underneath.

Gpers I like it but I would make the middle of the S thinner.
Pover nice but the E is kinda weird man.
Kasm if that's what it says the name is taken already and it needs a lot of work. Lose the white lines for one. I see u painted it on wood, that's good. Try doing it again but make you letters bigger. Your letters have a fucked up shape but I can see style in it, which Makes me think u stole the style. Either way u need to practice lots more. Show us some of ur paper work

 

Gets bigger on accident. Want some crits. I can do the 4 better too.