^^ Agreed, Cred man you have progressed heaps, it looks so good, the only thing I would change would be the middle bar of the e maybe is a little bit to thick? Apart from that it is nice.
Dark. Are you going for a piece or throw here? The S is just bad and is far away in comparison. Please read the new to graffiti thread again (or for the first time as I am sure you ignored it). The reason some of these cats are progressing well is they read it, studied it, and kept it moving. Until then you get no crits.
I'm going for a throw.Okay I'll work on me S and re-read the new to graffiti thread as I havce read it but was a while ago but thanks will do.
cred is the good version of flatscank people who've been active for the past year here will know what im sayin you deserve props, cred.
jesus cred im impressed... temb...id say define that M more and lose that flick off the B on the lower left part of it two simples i did yesterday..crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/8245/img0070gu.jpg i tried to do this like my handwriting not sure what to make of it [Broken External Image]:http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6180/img0074qd.jpg
the letters are okay minus the m, i see what you're trying to do, but have no idea why you disconnected the M completely. it looks like an I a T and a S. when your doing the m don't block the middle off, make the whole word one block, and the top hook of your b should be brought down fully into the bottom hook, otherwise it looks like an s.
I was told if I want crits to give them. I have enough sense to know when something looks like shit. It doesn't take an expert to notice disproportions and fucked up flow. Sorry if I'm just trying to help