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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. ComradeR

    ComradeR Member

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    any crits on all the pics i post is welcome. I suck but still trying, got another throwie down
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  2. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    Mildstyle - Does it say NK? - its better than what i can do + its Dark red + black so its hard to tell for me :p

    Zem - remove the outline around it remove them ring things and try pushing them a bit closer together and the middle line on the m move it a little bit

    Cirtz Please + i know it not that good but its hard to get a r that i like :p

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  3. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    im jealous of your throw naked and hope and the other few who gots some guud shit!

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  4. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    Like the S Seldom just a suggestion make the hole in the s a bit smaller
     
  5. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    ^ i think its cool as is, got some funk

    @ kase that shit aint workin, your trying to complicate it too much, cut back some yo
     
  6. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks for the crits journeys i appreciate it, is there any letters in particular that gotta go or should i jsut scratch the hole thing?
    Dank i like your S the way it is, the middle part of it is my favorite part of it, maybe coule be abit smaller but the way it is looks good, maybe dont have ur L going up on such a sharp angle at the bottom but either way it looks good
     
  7. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Thanks dank, that 2 letter got some steez to it im lovin it. The S is sick and that L is much better than what i could do, looks nice

    looks like a cool spot too
     
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  8. blackmath

    blackmath Senior Member

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    Better pictures, fucked up my K.

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  9. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    Tak how long that take you man looks Nice just need to get better paint :p

    What C looks better? 1 or 2

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  10. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    2nd C
    @Kase, I think your S is the strongest of the letters you got,you got all the negative space between the letters thats got to go, the a is unreadable and the k has that weird kick on the bottom bar
     
  11. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    yea norf it was a quick sloppy throw bur ill clean up them e's

    And dank im jealous of your simps we are even
     
  12. Spy10327

    Spy10327 Member

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  13. blackmath

    blackmath Senior Member

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    Uhhh probably around 5 minutes, not sure haha.

    And I like your first C more, it fits the R better
     
  14. dmgraff

    dmgraff Senior Member

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    insted of saying i suck how about you tell me how to get better
     
  15. R3bel1995

    R3bel1995 Senior Member

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    Axil, can you please just delete your sig. Until you stick with a name. THEN say "I write ____" or else change it to "Today I'm writing ____ but tomorrow I don't know what I'll write". Now regarding your throwie. Most importantly, make all the bars the same width. And on your R in the second one, don't put the right bar behind the left.
     
  16. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    im keeping this name until i get caught :p

    Critz please!

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  17. Woulf

    Woulf Member

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    Axil, Looks cool but the leg of the R could be a bit more fat. I'm not really the best to be giving critz, just trying to help.


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    Just started any critz would be much appreciated.
     
  18. centrysam

    centrysam Senior Member

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    @ axil . i think the c is to squre .
    throws should b made up of eather .simple bars . or half circles .
    you should also be able to do each letter with out lifiting marker from page .
    so to fix ur toss i would recomend making the top of the c and r the same shape . and the middle of the c more rounded because ur r is rounded . practice makes perfect . fill pages with small tosses an u will get it .
     
  19. bio99

    bio99 Member

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    the proportions could be better but what do ya think? critzz
     
  20. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    dumb it down, hombre ^^

    crits?
     

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