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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. lostyoursense

    lostyoursense Senior Member

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  2. R3bel1995

    R3bel1995 Senior Member

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    Too ski, I'm lovin your sig. Fresh bro
     
  3. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Youth: Pretty nice flow, just work on that U and some of your folds at the end of your bars.

    Sense: looks tight man, flows nicely.

    bumping for crits
     
  4. lostyoursense

    lostyoursense Senior Member

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    Mm nice not bad but your m's bigger than the other letters and the s is a little weird
     
  5. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    Well played Ribcage.. Well played... But for real the gap between the poo and the stew would be all wrong.

    @Mues I think it's pretty good man, i can see improvement. Something about the middle of the S is throwing me off, I do like the U and the E.
     
  6. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    was messin round in class, was supposed to be raecs but i fucked up
    lookin for crits on this as far as extensions connections and flow goes, from someone who knows a lil something

    mn- idk bout that. bars are funky as fuck and i don't feel the extensions
    that tag looking good, but you should listen to i think it was Phat that said to make sure you point your the middle of the M more so it don't go looking like H or U
     

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  7. TheFedexGuy

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  8. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Dank I'm digging it, seems like you coming a tad bit out of the comfort zone. Looks nice.

    For the Round Robin.

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  9. Mildstyles

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  10. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @Dankbuds shit negro that's dope as hell.
    @Neus make sure you keep your baseline consistent and try to keep your bars straight.
    @SynOne Good shit. Only part im iffy about is the bottom section of the O. The T is perfect.

    Tried pointing my bars on this one, not sure if it worked. Also feel like the R needs work.
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    Crits?
     
  11. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Dont hide the left leg of the R that much. It was good besides that.
     
  12. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    WHY DOES EVERYONE WANT TO POINT THEIR BARS NOW
    but yeah snyskipheeny- The bar on the bottom of the t got waaay too fat, and i just dont like either of the connections on the bottom of the H, but other than that its not bad.
    Creo- Pretty much the last 5 sketches ive seen form you looks like creo, you should change from cred ahahha. Hid the R too much, The bottom of that E is funky, and your double outline is sketchy, try single outlines till you got your hand steady and clean
     
  13. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @mild cause all the cool kids are doing it. And it looks more like a D if you think about it as a D hahaha. That'd be one messed up O. As for the second outline idk what happened. needed to hit another grav. Thanks for the crit
     
  14. PETER

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    cred best from you yet keep workin'
     
  15. lostyoursense

    lostyoursense Senior Member

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    new ish.jpg

    i usual go for real simple shit
     
  16. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Rzstslash.jpg Rzstslash2.jpg

    I know I put too many cuts in the first one but i spent so much time colouring it, thought I'd put it up for some crits!
     
  19. lostyoursense

    lostyoursense Senior Member

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