Yo slek you have some cool color schemes, but your letters on some of those sketches are pretty whack some of em are pretty nice. so i would say just work on your letters
fo sho... swishers all the way... slek (kew?) ur fills are too all over the place and they dont disguise ur wonky letters enough... the page full of simps is what u should keep doin to fix the structure...
Zook- wtf is Kew? and what do you mean my fills are all over the place? I was not trying to stay in one category or genre of fills....how about you be helpful and tell me what ones have shitty structure? your post really gave me no help at all...it is people like you that make this thread wack Rinse-good shit just don't really like how your I is crammed in there
View attachment 578900 sorry for the bad picture. rinse: on the right track, fix that R and I spacing. nel: going too crazy too early, keep going at the simples and go cleaner sleck: 1st picture, bottom left, thats the best. dont make your bars wiggle so much.
Safe i liked your old stuff alot more, that S is pretty whack the A is pretty good, maybe straighten the middle bar of the F and the E is alright
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vini- Middle of thhe M is sooo tiny, cool S! the arrow on the G doesnt match the one at the beginning. safe-try to make the F match the first part of the A. You got a mean S..I like....Try to make the whole top of all your letters match more....good shit tho
mobile cam View attachment 578981 View attachment 578982 Wooney - looking good to me, some of those extentions look like they need to go though, Safe - Safe, like it Vini - lose the arrows, and make the G more even with the M, ez
wut im tired of simps i got them obn lock i dotn even have to sketch them no more they juss coem out free hand its time for me to do other so iv been tryign and i know the arows are wack but fucking lol thanks for the crits guy tho
i always said "yeah i have simples down" but no one really does, you have to work on simples ALOT. thats the real key to being good at the more complicated stuff too.
safe - i liked your old stuff better,lately your s are lacking and looking the same..im not diggin the corny balls either..but i dig the handstyle woony - maaan that shit is fucking wack,i didnt like one of those straight up.go simple you dont have shit on lock,the 4th one is the only decent one slek - those fills looks real clean,not diggin the bends your adding to your letters tho..work on that rinse - looks tight,now do it on another paper with a clean outline and shadow mesag - go simple,dont do any drips or arrows or anything fancy just do keyboard letters and you and the people here like the results misoe - i like the character on the 1st one,not really feeling any of the letters...2nd one is dope,i would have made a capital I instead of that little lighting and i would make the s like the 1st picture but without the random bend at the bottom ,and a simple letter e would have been a lot better ,that one looks busted I GOT ABOUT 10 NEW SKETCHES COMING ALONG,I WONT BE POSTING THEM FOR ANOTHER WEEK DUE TO NO CAMERA ..KEEP ON SKETCHING EVERYONE,AND REMEMBER SIMPLE IS GOOD,DONT JUST SKETCH SOMETHING QUICK AND POST IT ON BOMBING SCIENCE,FOCUS AND TAKE YOUR TIME AND WAIT UNTIL YOU REALLY THINK ITS DOPE AND THEN POST IT HERE,HOPE MY CRITS SERVED WELL,PEACE!!
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