its an inside joke. i know that is mr. miagi

 

Here's some old shit, except the Goes piece. I tried to add the one effect on it...but I fucked it up. And panic I could see the D maybe but that L hella ain't a G.
And the L on the third picture is really that much smaller, it's just how I took the picture.

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@panic, i don't need your crits
Stein- that asian dude is dope, the left side of the face could have a bit more detail though. work on your hands and your letters, looks like you try too hard
Sol- the Goes looks aight, gets sloppy at the ES, and the GO kinda resembles Norfs Gowj...

 

Seder your piece a page back that is all cut up, the s is dope.

 

bump worthy

 

Dankbuds- thaks for the help or what ever you call it and the hands thing where did you get that from my hands suck I know but did you read my mind or something. I wanted to do hands and have him like karate choping that shit but just couldn't do it

 

Awh jeez. Facepalm. By hands he means handstyles. Like tags.

 

I haha cool then

 

I fucked up the E and the S, looked better without that effect. And the Gowj? Whats it look like?

 

just got its similarities.
i wouldn't have done that E to S connection. thats what kills it. I like that effect, could be refined in some places though

Thanks for the bump, Tasty

 

Sup guys, could I get crits on these? Ill give some crits where I can but dont think ill be much help.

 

if you hadn't fucked with the right bar on the W on the first one it would've been the best one by far. the left bar is fairly well done do that for the right too just flip it horizontally. other than that work on 3d with vanishing points etc. and keep doin straights.

 

Thanks, but what do I do to develop my simps? Ive been doing keyboard letter for a while now and want to try to develop it a bit more, do any of you guys have any advice? Or should I keep just doing simps and it will eventually work itself out?

 

Willis it sort of works itself out, but what you will eventually start doing is italicizing, then start bending bars slightly. I would stay with straight letters, maybe even make them italicized.

Don't like the bottom one on this one, only the S. Trying to get some fills in.

 

Skewr - the K on the first sketch the right down leg is not in proportion compared the other letters. The SKE from the second and the WR from the first sketch and it will look dope imo

 

skewr, stop biting. its fairly obvious

 

^ yes it is!

but i love the fills skewr

 

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