keyline ?? you mean second outline ?? i agree with the rest plus dont over do the designs..

 

Mase :: like y letters but I'd work on your 3d and defo go with a forcefield

Freestyle in the local shop, think I like these s's better than my normal ones, crits plz

 

damn yo thats ill

 

Mase- looks good but yea get the lines goin in the 3d
Snot- looks dope but the 3d could be a bit cleaner

heres my throwies...

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3mpolak- try hittin the black book for a bit and get ur shit to flow cause i just cant see it goin anywhere

not to proud of this but w/e

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well thanks for looking over my shit. btw which one is the best out of those. and another question what is flow? i keep hearing people talking about how a pice does/ or doesn't have flow, but i hae n idea what it means. and i DO black book. a lot. about 90% of my graffiti is blackbook

 

same shit, call it what you want

 

basically just same size letters and relitive style to the lettering, 6th downs the best.

 

3mpolack all of those are terrible hit books and DO FUCKING SIMPS AND BARS

 

@ MASE: Your letters have potential, but your A is covered by your M. And with the way the bar was set to run the bar on the A vanished. Pull that A out, and make it on it's own. Your letters have the potential for flavor, but they need to "Make love to each other." No homo. Your accents in your fill are nice, however clean up and cut the lines on the inside. It'll bang. Try and put more swing in that S. In turn, instead of dropping the line on that E straight down try to curve it to the right. So, it is close to the S.. but is all it's own. That random line coming up in the E on that middle bar.. cut or remove. Definitely drop a keyline on the outside. Even a fat ass outline would make this pop. The piece is right on the edge of a monster. Small attentions to detail would help this out, you're on point letter-wise in my opinion.

@ Woony..
Yo man, if you're saying it looks like NEK.. Fix it man. And that picture, is shitty. I use dollar paint.. shit paint whatever. If you're using that, make it happen Cap'n. Feel me?

 

Cheers for the crits fellas, totally agree, need to work on putting somthing in my 3d,mite make me pay attention to detail a bit more. And the background was jus random cans I had, I normally go for a black n bronze background with the green letters but .. had a load half blues,

 

Crazy monster shit : )

 

i like what you're doin dangeri but you need to work on your letters dude.

 

i think his letters are good and nice colors too

 

his letters r shit....
and i uno what he did on the three d, puttin lines in half of it then not touching n e thing else.
its clean though, kinda

 

Cheers for the input stuck, but I generally only take crits from people that are worth atleast half a wank... Personally, I'd rarther shit on my own head than make my graff look even an inch closer to your generic 'imtryingtoohardwithmywackextentions' look. Cheers tho

 

hahaha boooooooooooooooooooooom , sit the fuck down!! ( excuse this if u alreaddy are sitting)

 

i saw that too rewt, pm'd him earlier hah.... nice that he gets down with awal, zewler we hit a few cars together sometime nagle!

 

ahahaha danger w.e floats ur boat, just seeing some shitty stuff get its dick rode cause of lotsa colours in the background just pisses me off. and ill still burn u anyday paint or pencil