bump

oest- get rid of the space in between its not really a throw

 

looks pretty clean too me, i love the character, pretty nice

 

one liners is what i grew up around nice shyt sher id work on da a thou lol

 

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got bored sher

 

new throw

 

pretty simple, relly dope though

 

sher u gutta teach me to do dat m wen u come bak lol

 

name exchange for mase i write zuek i hate my throws i hate there ugly

 

our names are way too close

 

Battle for it.

 

I think they should battle to the death for it, avec light sabers.

 

I definitely agree.

 

bring me my red shirt its go time haha
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this doesnt satisfy my but whatever just got off a 10 hour flight

 

Resm wins.

But not by much..

 

crits what do i need to improve
the R is funky to me and E is sketchy

 

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Is that a lower case 'd'?

I see some cleanliness in the 'K'. It's lookin' better. Lose the exclamation point. Add a quick drop to fill in some negative space between letters and bars of letters.