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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. drae

    drae New Member

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    my second try at wildstyle...
     
  2. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    drae- your wildstyle might offend a lot of writers due to a lack of respect to what wildstyle is.
    skope- nice and clean lines, I like your E's i don't know if your 3d selection really compliments them though.
    nah- your not impressing anybody if you actually slap those stickers somewhere, don't slant the A connection.
     
  3. Hulk

    Hulk Member

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    Black outline turned sloppy i know.. but Crits please.
     

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  4. Asker (ANON)

    Asker (ANON) Member

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    Check 'em guys
     

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  5. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    ask- i love ur style
     
  6. extinct

    extinct Senior Member

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    which ask... asker or maself ask2
    tempo... put your o closer to the temp... an there is no perfect o... its all personal preference
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  7. Asker (ANON)

    Asker (ANON) Member

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    oh shit mang, similar names. fully asker just too lazy to do full pieces sometimes haha
     
  8. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    BAAAMMMPPPPP... legit this is doooopee... you wanna do an exchange bro?
     
  9. extinct

    extinct Senior Member

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    Ye son... Will be simpler than this though... I cant get it all perfect with steeze yet
     
  10. kweezy

    kweezy Member

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    newest piece , any crits? :)


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  11. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    i think ur piece has chicken pox kweezy.
     
  12. Shroomsh

    Shroomsh Senior Member

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    whos up for an exchange, tell me what you write?
     
  13. nah!

    nah! Banned

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    i never said i was trying to impress anyone
     
  14. ChronicKush

    ChronicKush Member

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    NAH-- connect the bars on your N, and move you letters closer together
    SKOPE-- Letters are ok. Purple drips are off. The 3d is bigger in some places than others such as your last E.
    TEMPO- Nice simples but move your letters closer....oh and try to crit peoples pieces not just make dick comments. lol
    EXTINCT- Lookin good bro, tho some 3d on that shizz!
    KWEEZY- too many bubbles...and the 3d looks off. also use bars for every part of your letters and color your letters! lol

    Did this for my friends mom...lol any crits?


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  15. MASE P_2s

    MASE P_2s Senior Member

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    chronic the y needs work but its pretty decent
     
  16. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    this looks sorta alright, lots of things to pick on though.


    @ kush I can be a dick, but i try to do so in the most polite way possible haha. my first thought on your last post was those lines are so clean. width of the letters seem just right. looks on point.
     
  17. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    your bar width is still off the p looks like a d all the the bars like on the bottom of the t gotta go
     
  18. Get Rekt!

    Get Rekt! Senior Member

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  19. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    hows this look?
    i gotta fix the top of the D
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  20. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    ^yeah fix the D. Your letters dont flow and dont really match either. your S is kinda slanted like this direction / if you gone do it with 1 letter do it with all of em,