just getting back into things myself after about a 20 year hiatus. ya can tell i am not up to scratch yet from the eraser marks lol. crits please as i will be looking to expand and perfect different styles as i go. View attachment 561485 and damn i cant wait for my copics to come in this week. lame assed markers really dont help the cause much =oX View attachment 561486
yeah, youve got the right idea on the second one, spacing, overlap is alright but dont chop ya letters that much n some of em hurt, id say round your d straighten your i n open your s as first step.
thanks for the input, relearning something that used to be fairly easy 20 years ago is a pain in my ass. i will give those ideas some thought and see how my next one turns out
man, i gotta say, i definitely liked your older style a whole lot more. that one throw up you did a while back, that giant white one, DOPE. why the change?
i concur ssome stuff i sketched in school [Broken External Image]:http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5426/scan0006ns.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/2886/scan0007w.jpg i hate the charac looks fuckin wierd
no offense, does that say TERD? I have seen this style a lot, the R (if it is an R) has to long of a bar and to skinny in my opinion. the first letter and last are a little to... elusive (i am really trying to not sound like an ass, especially since i am so toy) make ur word BOLDER, so even the untrained eye can read it then do additional things... my .02 sick of all the hate
like soath said, the first and last letters are hard to figure out. looks like SERO to me but i have no idea
yeah the dude sorta sucks... try drawing more simple... get this book the natural way to draw (it's old school) the bulbous top of ur Z looks a little weird to me and the W should match the E more... I mean on the red one, my .02 peace
Boomslang-like the second one the fill is clean Weird dough-looks like OST at first look but then I saw that you put water on the top left so I'm thinkin it says WAT, looks good don't like what I'm thinkin is the 'W' and 'T' Stussy- hate the Z everything else is clean as fluck Sero-just like that E And waze..well I think there's already enough people helping u/telling u the same thing, keep at it tho
Giant throw up? I changed because the style i was doing was way over used and wasnt challenging me like i would it too. The shit im doing now is a bit more challenging, has some DC style with some funk thrown in.
spare- u should finish the letters with 3d and outline, and the characters nice but is that a crystal ball hes holding? View attachment 561701 crits..i did the corner design for fun