yeah man i was mad rushed and i could barly see the yellow on that wall cause it was mad dark but yeah thanks for those crits
keane on ur k the top bar bend is mad stiff u should eas up on it and the bottem one would look better if didnt go under the other side

 

keane- i dont like how the e's are different, but its still fresh, really feelin that a

 

keane, im not feeling the two different E's either, and try connect the middle bar for you N at the bottom, rather than 2/3rds down

teez, did you not see what you were doing for the last two letters? find a safe wall and just practice away.

brain, give crits. im not feelin your steeze at all, but its clean at least.

did this earlier, im content with how it ended up

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Dont like the colours jet but its clean and the structre is pretty great. Just make the I a bit taller next time.

 

man, i should have used my blue for my forcefield. the green dosen't really bring it out much... i pour failsauce on my spaghetti.

 

Haha, its not that bad bro. Personal preference is all.

 

i dont know what it is with me and getting the bottom.

 

first piece

so this is my first piece that i've done lemme know whatcha think.


 

http://www.flickr.com/photos/25712043@N06/2415255943/My first time picking up a can. All constructive criticism is appreciated.

 

You got some good can control and all but stick to paper and get a better letter struct.

But yeah you got awesome can control for first time and shit keep it up

Azulman work on paper first as well get better letters, then when you go paint go somewhere chill and practice, but yeah keep it up g

 

ok guys i will take yur advice and try it on the next sketch

bump any more crits

 

Cheers for that. I've got someone with a lot of experience guiding me and since doing it I've been doing nothing but working on my letters on paper, over and over.

I'm looking to keep things basic and real simple gonna build it all up gradually.

Next time I go out to a legal while my guy is working his magic I was thinking of just practicing my staright lines and curves with a can...would this be a good idea? I wanna be able to get my lines real sharp for my next piece.

 

yeah man see thats way to do it
start super simple and not like every kid who starts off with those 30 miles of scribbles they call a piece

 

yellow, sketch a bit in your book, keep your letters the same size. good painting skills though.

azulman, fill the O and dont surround your piece with a 3d, just do it from one angle.

rsakens, maybe make your A taller, it looks small.

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Now those are colours I can agree with jetpack. Who'd ya stomp there?

 

my own shit, its my practice wall.

 

ah, only thing I would do to it is make the star a bit bigger.
200th post... I dont have a life.

 

Honestly, I say leave the star out. It looks out of place to me. It messes with the whole equal height of the letters you got goin on there.

 

keane i still dig it but mabye change your style since you got that one down pretty good