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shading suggests north lighting, which doesn't make much sense on a wall. Other then that your not gonna get much feedback for a super generic r and a
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View attachment 598044 designing new throw up. this is what i got. not a huge fan. crits? okae: your O is too simple compared to your K RA: keep working... alot. Sbal: your P doesn't work w. the flow, same with your S. but i dont think you seriously write that so i guess it doesn't matter
bottom page bump. and it doesn't flow if your O is just an O and your K is something good, and just bc the original letter is just a circle doesn't mean you can use that as an excuse.
does it say safe? i like the s but your outline comes hella close to itself on the bottom there. f and e look the same, middle part of e should be a tad bit wider, and make the middle part of the f more a circle instead of an oval and that throw would be solid edit- you really gettin on that ***** bout his O? How much can you really do to the structure of a throw O? especially when its the first letter
...So i dont know about flow?? i just got off a graffiti break,paintings a little dusty i know that but i dont flow?
@Safe: DAAAAAAMN. That throw is looking REAL hurt, dude. Scrap it, ASAP. The loop at the bottom of the S is horrid, and makes its structure look worse IMO. Those random tumors on the edge of the E need to go too. I know what you were going for with the tumor, but that shit deads the flows IMO. You did the same thing on the S, which created dead space between the top of the SA. If you're going to do one of those things, make it taller to avoid creating dead space. Keep practicing, nigguh. Also, it's ironic that you're doggin' someone else's flow when their throws shit on yours. Just sayin'.
went over one of my old throws, i havent changed styles, so i just threw it upside down since its the same throw. its weird working from right to left. peep that ugly hand
looks clean for being a little more challenging to you weed ... I think im goin to try my name upside down then backwards im a lefty it might work out easier for me.