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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Bump that Reach exchange!
     
  2. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Some stuff I done did do.

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  3. Tempo718

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  4. Colors

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    Tempo do you write tempo
     
  5. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    yeah an sauna 2

    edit:not sauna 2 "sauna" too
     
  6. Colors

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    I don't know why but when I got bored earlier I sktched a quick tempo simple, and I figured ill post it on here and you could just sketch a simple based off of mine. Its a quick one so its not too greaT but hey just an idea, thought I could help you out
     
  7. SkateJunt

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  8. DRZ

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    skatejunt - it makes my eyes hurt. should have just filled it in completely. it looks like doodoo the way it is.
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  9. smack1one

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  10. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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  11. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    Woah mang, that D is hurtin, and the S aint too good either. The bottom bar of S is too thick for how short it is, if you woud made it a little bit longer it probably wouldnt of made a difference
     
  12. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    yeah colors im wit that ga'hed 1st tho lol.
    um dank i ono what he talk bout that is decent. even if you are a dick sometimes u can still write.
    only thing i see what he sayin is the supporting bar on the D is too think. big whoop
    if you took a moment to try to duplicate one of your favorite writers you dont have to post it but
    it might do you some good.
     
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  13. SynOne

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    Smeck - If your goal was to make them all slanted to the right. Nice attempt. Try to make sure they are slanted at the same angle. That tends to help it flow better. I dig that fill though.

    DRZ - Bad bad letter structure. To many bends and pointless addons. Go simple and do a bunch of straight letters.
     
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  14. SynOne

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    IMAG0077.jpg

    Exchange with Slotr. Not as clean as it needs to be.

    Bump Crit them.
     
  15. MrSpyrydus

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    My first attempt in a pretty long time. It's just a sketch so be as hard as you can on crits:D
    PS: it says ART btw:D
     

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  16. Tempo718

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    389063_242395889155079_100001540101387_680996_1921469263_n.jpg 2 sides to each story chi town stay up ez.
     
  17. ribcage

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    syn did a simp with no extensions, and what do you know, turns out to be the best thing hes ever done. You should have made your 3d go in the other direction, it woulda cut down way more negative space
     
  18. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Fuck you bro lol. I can do simps. But I'm trying to learn to start extensions. Cause I can rock simples.
     
  19. TBS

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    Syn, that straight is pretty cool. nit keen on the character with it but it's still cool. just clean up the lines a bit. and as Ribs said, maybe it would have been better if the 3D was the other way.
    Spyrydus... ehm... scrap that altogether. you'll hear this a lot but do a straight letter or something. just start again.
    Tempo, the letter structure is horrible. try and straighten out the letters and make them all the same height. the 3D's off at some parts and the fill in the 3D doesn't look right. really don't like any of the letters....

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    i know the straight's a little off at parts. have since sorted them, just don't have a pic since fixing it.
     
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  20. Sync1

    Sync1 Member

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    Hello everyone. I'm new to the forums and to the whole graffiti scene. I'm just starting out to be honest... here's some of my recent pieces. Please check it out and give me some feedback on where to improve etc. Thanks! :)

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    I used Molotow Paint Markers, Pencil Colors and Touch Markers...