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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. sellers E.

    sellers E. Senior Member

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    bump for crits. i realize the o is a bit wrong at the bottom
     
  2. "Sin"

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  3. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    you tweaked the S a tiny bit. resembles seen too much. be creative
     
  4. ..romero..

    ..romero.. Elite Member

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    no it doesnt...but you should tweak it anyways...couldnt hurt.
     
  5. nuce4

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  6. Manupro7

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  7. Tez-Graf

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  8. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    Nuce- 2 months?? I couldn't do that shit at 2 months. Keep it up, I guess.
     
  9. nuce4

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    mhm im writting about 6-7 months but that was crap,shit and what not.
    i didnt build letters,no proportions was...was lame.
    only 2 months ago i started serious and clean.
    so thats why i dont count the rest 5 months.they were lame seriously.
    thanks for the comment.
     
  10. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/2850/p5223260.jpg
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    haven't been on here in a while but i really want to get into the good 3-d style shit this is my first attempt at it if you got constructive crits you should give em but i dont want that give up or stop that shits useless i know the shading is all fucked up too but ya...

    tez- your e looks really wierd like the bottom of it
    nuce- that shits lookin pretty good keep up man
    daylo- ya you already know your O is shit other than that its the same shit that i have always seen switch it up or stop postin the same lookin shit with different fills
     
  11. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    Tez, space out your letters. get ride of the shine.

    Nuce, that's cleaan.. the only thing I can say is your handy isn't my style, but many will disagree. Keep it up.

    KnoxIn, you should probably get your original letters down before you get into that 3d crazy shit. It's cool, but I don't think you're ready.
     
  12. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    im getting to the fact that theres at least a couple writers in each city that write sin...its such a common name that everyone uses just like faze
     
  13. FrizzleFry

    FrizzleFry Senior Member

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    BIK...is that your crew lol
     
  14. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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  15. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    it looks way cleaner than the first.
     
  16. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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  17. ..romero..

    ..romero.. Elite Member

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    youll get the hang of it.but next time try to be cleaner with your line work homie.
     
  18. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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  19. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    Dude, you will probably never see clean sketches from me.
    I could be in this game for like 15 years, structure out the fucking ass,
    can control compared to no other,
    but I'd still have shit sketches.
    They're just ideas for shit to put on walls,
    I could give a fuck less if they are clean or not.
    Not trying to be a dick or anything, just doin' me.



    on another note,
    fuuuuuck a dying orange marker

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  20. Jestur

    Jestur New Member

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    Looking for some feedback...

    Hey guy's I'm new here, just looking for some feedback on some black book work I did. I am looking for friendly constructive feedback. Please, if you have no constructive feedback or friendly constructive feedback do not say anything. I am not one to make fun of or diss the shit out of your piece so I can only ask, please refrain from doing it to me. That's just what I am asking from you guys and gals. I don't want to come off as a stick in the mud. Anyway enough talk...here you go!

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    The one's posted first are the more recent ones. The last ones are older ones.
     
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