Menu

Welcome!

By registering with us, you'll be able to discuss, share and private message with other members of our community.

Throwies

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

Share This Page

  1. kace91

    kace91 Senior Member

    • Messages: 78
    • Likes Received: 0
    Everything shittie, i know.

    Do you see anything wich can be improved and become "good"? any idea or advice will be welcome, ive been some time filling papers but i feel like im not advancing at all...

    [Broken External Image]:http://s3.subirimagenes.com:81/otros/4222780snc00700.jpg

    as4.subirimagenes.com_otros_4222775snc00703.jpg
     
  2. mefe

    mefe Senior Member

    • Messages: 75
    • Likes Received: 0
    @kace.. dont put the little spike on the K.

    i kinda like the E thats on the second pic in the middle of the page.
     
  3. RemoZ

    RemoZ Senior Member

    • Messages: 434
    • Likes Received: 0
    OTHER THAN KAN!

    Everyone here needs to do the letters as they appear on their keyboard for awhile,not hating but none of that shit has any structure
     
  4. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,170
    • Likes Received: 643
    you're a faggot.
    you suck horridly.
     
  5. mista_dza

    mista_dza Senior Member

    • Messages: 69
    • Likes Received: 0
    so you like that older throw?
    i guess ill have to go back and mess with that...so you know i was up for about 3 nights messing with that one 0.0 i would hope it looks somewhat good ha
     
  6. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,822
    • Likes Received: 1
    Kan's sucks too. In my opinion, of course.
     
  7. mawks

    mawks Senior Member

    • Messages: 199
    • Likes Received: 0
    View attachment 550162
    which you guys feelin the most?

    kace, dumb it down a lil
    viseversa? that shit's dumb and too long, all those letters are wack especially the v.. start over, simple, and just write vise or versa instead of both
    ber, it's decent just clean it up, get rid of the holes in the e and r
    dkode, the o looks like a d too, otherwise, not bad
     
  8. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,889
    • Likes Received: 2
  9. SHER_WON_WTS

    SHER_WON_WTS Senior Member

    • Messages: 393
    • Likes Received: 1
    those throws are great MAWKS, and yeah, middle one.
     
  10. Zest3

    Zest3 Senior Member

    • Messages: 153
    • Likes Received: 0
    Give it up.
     
  11. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,889
    • Likes Received: 2
    And Mawk, looking it over again, that A doesn't fit the middle, so change that, and you'll be set.
     
  12. Rosie716

    Rosie716 Senior Member

    • Messages: 55
    • Likes Received: 0
    ai812.photobucket.com_albums_zz46_RosieOne716_Rosie1.jpg

    I know the E is a little big. something im working on. I actually like it a lot, which is rare because i usually hate all my shit. what do you guys think>?
     
  13. kace91

    kace91 Senior Member

    • Messages: 78
    • Likes Received: 0
    Thanks for the tips. I also like that E, but it seems a lot worse when used in the whole name, i think it doesnt "match" there.

    So, you think i can stick to this one and work from it?

    as2.subirimagenes.com_otros_4227850snc00705.jpg
     
  14. Rosie716

    Rosie716 Senior Member

    • Messages: 55
    • Likes Received: 0
    KACE- your K is HUGE compared to everything. That Clooks bad cuase its outta porportion. make all the letters the same size, forget bout shaddows right now. and just work on even strokes. a throwie should be something you can flow through quickly. and that doesnt look like it can be very "flowfull". just keep workin on it. keep it simple and uniform.
     
  15. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,822
    • Likes Received: 1
    ai43.tinypic.com_mjslcx.jpg

    Thought I'd try my hand at making an original throw..

    Any thoughts?
     
  16. Rosie716

    Rosie716 Senior Member

    • Messages: 55
    • Likes Received: 0
    idk man, hard for me to crit, i can barely read it, i like throws you can read. only because, whats the point of bombing if it cant be read by the majority of people ya know?
     
  17. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,822
    • Likes Received: 1
    You can't read it? It says Resist.
     
  18. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

    • Messages: 2,926
    • Likes Received: 3
    i think its coo. just work on your S's a bit and at first i mistaked your E for an S. the line down the middle threw me off

    Kace look at big writers for inspiration on your throw. it will help.

    Rosie i dont like that S and thin up the E
     
  19. Zest3

    Zest3 Senior Member

    • Messages: 153
    • Likes Received: 0
  20. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

    • Messages: 2,926
    • Likes Received: 3
    is that what you write or is that a 2 letter? and its kinda plain. and i dont like how the E looks like a smiley face.