Everything shittie, i know. Do you see anything wich can be improved and become "good"? any idea or advice will be welcome, ive been some time filling papers but i feel like im not advancing at all... [Broken External Image]:http://s3.subirimagenes.com:81/otros/4222780snc00700.jpg
@kace.. dont put the little spike on the K. i kinda like the E thats on the second pic in the middle of the page.
OTHER THAN KAN! Everyone here needs to do the letters as they appear on their keyboard for awhile,not hating but none of that shit has any structure
so you like that older throw? i guess ill have to go back and mess with that...so you know i was up for about 3 nights messing with that one 0.0 i would hope it looks somewhat good ha
View attachment 550162 which you guys feelin the most? kace, dumb it down a lil viseversa? that shit's dumb and too long, all those letters are wack especially the v.. start over, simple, and just write vise or versa instead of both ber, it's decent just clean it up, get rid of the holes in the e and r dkode, the o looks like a d too, otherwise, not bad
I know the E is a little big. something im working on. I actually like it a lot, which is rare because i usually hate all my shit. what do you guys think>?
Thanks for the tips. I also like that E, but it seems a lot worse when used in the whole name, i think it doesnt "match" there. So, you think i can stick to this one and work from it?
KACE- your K is HUGE compared to everything. That Clooks bad cuase its outta porportion. make all the letters the same size, forget bout shaddows right now. and just work on even strokes. a throwie should be something you can flow through quickly. and that doesnt look like it can be very "flowfull". just keep workin on it. keep it simple and uniform.
idk man, hard for me to crit, i can barely read it, i like throws you can read. only because, whats the point of bombing if it cant be read by the majority of people ya know?
i think its coo. just work on your S's a bit and at first i mistaked your E for an S. the line down the middle threw me off Kace look at big writers for inspiration on your throw. it will help. Rosie i dont like that S and thin up the E
is that what you write or is that a 2 letter? and its kinda plain. and i dont like how the E looks like a smiley face.