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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    i used to be like u until i had a spiritual awakening. and ps there is no god we are all our own gods.
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  2. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    you have no soul, neither does your "art".
     
  3. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    You're a bitch though, plankton, so...

    Stuck, on the last one, the T is weird cause of the extensions on the top bar, and the C looks like a shitty E. Fix that and it's a cool piece.
    Sezer, I like that Stuck throw a lot.
    Brains, dope as fuck as always.
    Tofer, those are kinda wack...It just doesn't flow good. The F/E connection is bad. And just in general...the letters are weak.
    Everyone else on this page needs to go to the toy thread.
     
  4. bait

    bait Senior Member

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    brains shit is pretty dope dig the fill!
    experiment :cool:
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  5. TBS

    TBS Senior Member

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    bait that's pretty cool but it sorta loses it's flow near the end. i think the bottom of the L should be longer on the right hand side and shorter on the left. saying that, the way it flows back into the G is cool as fuck in my books. and the U.. doesn't fit. really not feeling the U.... still pretty dope though.

    also, been posting mainly in the Toy thread, would anyone object you me posting here? feel that the crits are more legit from people that have a clue what they're doing..
    simple shit for talking... crits welcome.
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  6. 4menace2society0

    4menace2society0 Banned

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  7. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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  8. scissorcrotch2

    scissorcrotch2 Member

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    Bullshit 5 minute.
    highlighter, dying prismas and ultra fine sharpie.

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    slit: that shit looks tight, art major im assuming? looks very art school. That bird reminds me of the tat that every 20 year old college girl gets to try to look like an individual.

    tbs: i say stay in the toy one and clean up your lines and not too much wrong, just need more progression.

    bait: the EG is tight but you lose it after that, connect your letters better and they won't look so discombobulated.
     
  9. 4menace2society0

    4menace2society0 Banned

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    slits a artsy farty faggot from a couple years back
    i was just going through the older shit, and remembered how much hate i had for that queer pussy art school trick hoe
     
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  10. scissorcrotch2

    scissorcrotch2 Member

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    i remember that ni gga. and i see what you did there, don't do that. i think you know what i mean.
     
  11. 4menace2society0

    4menace2society0 Banned

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  12. PREA672

    PREA672 Elite Member

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    Shoot son, stomp him out by pressing f5 really fast. It's how we e-bangers fight.
     
  13. extinct

    extinct Senior Member

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    hey paser that ass keeps catching my eye g
     
  14. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    x2 I'm diggin' that out line a lot. Not too keen on the fill, but that's just me complaining. Exchange?
     
  15. scissorcrotch2

    scissorcrotch2 Member

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    yeye im down. what you write?

    some shit from back in the pages.

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  16. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    Antik 1. I'm going to feel like a bitch posting yours as I am far from qualified, but push your self toward greatness.... Paser I assume?
     
  17. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    yea i remember dude, could have been a decent writer but had a massive ego
     
  18. 4menace2society0

    4menace2society0 Banned

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  19. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    you need to define the horizontal bar more
     
  20. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Oh I see whatchu did there sear! I sees it.