oh god how can you peice witha throw like that
i see elot right thereee

 

flat- other than your F thats a pre bangin throw

 

how the hell did you find walls like that!!?? IT HASNT EVEN BEEN BUFFED

if i went down a train track all the walls would be white-grey paint underneath a piece

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im trying to develop something

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(wont be painting NU beause its a crew in my city)

 

dont matter if its a crew cause yours is a name
just put NU then neum inside
theres a crew in my town/city thats SA adn i sometimes bomb and but S.A then skina1 on the side

 

what up wit this tumor E?

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T should be bigger fa reeeaaal

 

pretty rough sketch

 

Ok guys which throwie do you like better? Jam is short for jammer man a nickname given to me when i was 2 and i know jammer man is kinda a queer tag but jam is pretty legit and jam has some sentimental value to it and isnt some random name that i thought looked cool. Therefore, JM is short for it.

Whats you opinion?
also, constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated, thnx

 

shits tight flat
jam those all lick ass

 

i said constructive criticism, i dont see your shit anywhere .......

 

wtf am i supposed to say? Look at those throws. are any of them looking good to you? You gotta think for yourself sometimes. Look at other peoples shit on this site and flickr to get an idea of what a good throw looks like. Also, my lack of posted pics is irrelevent, as i dont feel it necessary for me to post my work for crits, im happy with my shit. recognize yo

 

Jam- didnt you already post that lil story about your name... lol
anyway, i would personally stick with uppercase for that, but its up to you.
loose those waves and turn them into bars. and listen to eclectic boogaloo on doing at least a bit of research.

 

I think I like this one.

 

Haha, It's definitely better than the last one you posted man. Work on your lines, bring down the leg of the K, and make it a bit smaller. Work on the top of the A.

 

Bumpin this cuz i wana know what yall think of this fucked up E.

 

It would work if the rest of the letters were like that maybe. Just seems out of place and flamboyant compared to the T.

 

......uuuh its fucked up? Lol if you know its fucked up why we gotta tell you agains its fucked up?

Anyways, theirs tumors on all of your letters, not just the E. Top left of O top left of S top right of T and top left of T(that 1 looks benign tho). and the bubbles/drops at the end look real bad, them are all about having a clean hand movement, work on em

 

reach post your throw i wanna se a nice throw in this thread

 

hows about i bump this lil vid instead?

 

Have you been using that for a while or just improvised it?