alright sir, forget about that fresh n funky stuff ( even though they have better letter structure), forget about all these arrows they just distract n dont fit, forget about the spraying hand coming out of nowhere, just take ya letters n do what you did when you drew that tiny funk, do it big n centered, one color fill will do it for now...lets see how that turns out
aight i'm makin sum of that now aight.. be up with an flix later.. and ye i know i shoudn't be doing like wanna be wildstyle shit but ye.. it did turn out way more shitty then it was before aight brb with the flix aight.
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bump for crits: sirbig0: use photobucket or something i cant see your most recent pictures okwa: new to graffiti forum should help, i get what you are trying to do but i think you need a little practice with the foundations and basics before you try that wiggly stuff. epoch: i like it. very nice, clean, simple. Now start overlapping letters. Actually do that shit as a roller first. cyto: I like the orange one alot more but i feel like the B is falling back a little to much.
bumping this for crits 2 safe- not ba dman u need to fix some bars here and there but overall not bad....still waiting for that exchange lol
safe, first of all your f does not fit, s a e follow a straight line your f stands out plus its being overlapped by a and e, youve def. to work over your f, your e is a lil too big, and its middlebar is too fat, overall its really stiff n i woulodnt do that second outline background thing.. kew, watch the SIZE of your letters, f , k are too small, work on placing your letters and id leave away all those little "cut ins" for example at the k or u, just keep workin on it
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yeah these are better...1rst n last are my fav. , stay away from 3d or do it right, its off n looks clowny...R is definately your weak point especially the top plus its often too small, overall concentrate on keeping size n proportion
SirBigO- it looks like your lacking basic letter structure and seems a little more like a throwie, i dont know if that what your going for but i would say work bars and simples for a while. good job, keep working it can i get some critss?
Chikken-Looks real good Sir-Not really feeling them but I do like the last one Screwed up on drop on the R and the E didnt fit.
rinse. this is really good. nice and clean, and your letters are very well balanced. only complaint, the S. the bottom curve is too fat i think, doesnt go with the rest of your name. just even that out.
safe -it doesnt look bad but the bar sticking out the top part of the a is wack and the f is not looking to powerful and the s should have been brought down more cyto- go simple man,wack stuff kew- those swirls look stupid,the k is wack..and honestly i do prefer your old name better chicken- the bar coming out the bottom of the c is stretched out way to much,same thing goes for the bar on the bottom s sir- go simple man,use bars rins - maybe a lower case r would look better a quick freestyle i did [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/niggger.jpg
dank thats halarious. i used to alot of my sketches on my homework and school flyers. but i like the style on the top one, only problem is the C and the R are to close, do what you did with the c and the k. and the s is to big.