The smiley was on my old throw before I changed it a bit, I just thoguth it was clean and should post it. But yeah so the sketches are good you're saying, just try to get it more like the throw?
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Bump for critz, Yes I gave them. Yes capo, keep working on those sketchs. Work on cleaning up those letters.
i posted those pics yesterday and no one commented, so i went to the other thread.besides, 3 of those are new.and 2 threads isnt "every paint thread", now sh.
The Grey one at the bottom's aPO is good, but the C is terrible now. Take the C from the blue one below and start touching it up to fit with the aPO you have on the grey one. Also slim down the P's back a little bit. But not too much. (grey) Make All the letter the same height... And just keep working on it.
stoopid post im sorry but that looks nothing liek a "nyc style" honestly keep it to the books and go with ur own style
Capo your throwie is getting better although not really digging the C. Work on that and it'll look pretty good. Also you might be able to improve the A the a little by not making the tail so big also the thing on the A the comes down maybe try and round it off to suit the bubble style. Cheers.
[Broken External Image]:http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/6401/oakstrnewar6.jpg the bottom one is sloppy.crits?[/QUOTE] leski - love the handstyle under your throw..not feelin letters but its chill. in shie-ster theres a dope philly style tag off to the left...it looks like your rush like someone is comin up behind you. i think if you slow down a little it would look a lot better
That was a while ago post and drawing, and actually have you seen Sane(earlier stuff) and Cope2's throws? they do resemble my letters...
[Broken External Image]:http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6835/geski6za1.jpg I like this peice better than almost all of what i have seen you do. the only thing i dont like is the dot over the I i think it should be snugged in to the left with the rest of it so it lines up better with the bottom of the I
Yah, I feel the same way. I'll do one up quick here, I actually have changed it a bit since I posted that. I like it because unlike most stuff I've done before this is totally unique. I had no influences in it, and so far I've never seen another throw like it.
[/quote] I like that style. It seems to flow pretty nicely. The only thing i see that maybe you could try differently is making the bottom of the k flow more like the bottom of the A.
theirs no need to try and beef with me.if you dont like it, say so.no need to get over enthusiastic about it.it is bad, so what, its on a fucking table, who cares. some cleaner ones.. View attachment 366991 View attachment 366992 View attachment 366993