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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    nvm its cool
     
  2. Shroomsh

    Shroomsh Senior Member

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  3. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    the only thing i like about that is the fill. the letters need some work. and the ST looks kinda awkward like hover hands awkward. random question are you left handed?
     
  4. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    @killroy yo thats cool, except for the U, that little extension on the bottom part where the right vertical bar meets the rest, you know that little pinner swoosh extension? if that wasnt there, id prolly like the letter... cheers anyays
     
  5. semo

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  6. jayd732

    jayd732 Member

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    ^u need 2 work on som letter structure bro go simpler

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  7. bak

    bak Senior Member

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    lose the arrow on the a and that s needs improvement
     
  8. Jiska Matos

    Jiska Matos Senior Member

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    110110-2356.jpg 180110-0059.jpg random stuff... @Killroy looking fresh
     
  9. Jiska Matos

    Jiska Matos Senior Member

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    dude you suck at epic levels... your purple thing you posted here looks like something i would spit after drinking black vodka!
     
  10. Saiko

    Saiko Senior Member

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    Crits,please
    @jiska yeah, i do that's why i'm here.
     
  11. jayd732

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    tht arrow is there to kill the dead space i think it looks a lil empty without it
     
  12. Jiska Matos

    Jiska Matos Senior Member

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    you need to go back to the basic of the basics and do complete sketches, not some fast shit you do in 3 to 5m, they don't need to be perfect in colouring or lines, but try making it look like you care about what you r doing
     
  13. Jiska Matos

    Jiska Matos Senior Member

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    it does look empty, try working the M to fill that gap
     
  14. Saiko

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    That actually took me a little while i sketched it once and the pen fucked up the lines, so i did it again took like 9 minutes cus i kept spazing about my lines and letters. it looks under done cus i'm out of markers to fill/outline/effect/etc.
    I get what your saying, though,
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    Bump
    Crits?
     
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  15. LiveFreeDieFree

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    Some sketches I did in class/at work.
     
  16. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    make the t thin at the bottom cuz its the same as ur I and bring the m and k out from hiding lol
     
  17. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    the T breaks up the A an makes it look like an H. too.
    Live free: work on where to bend your letters and connections.... Not a fan of wobbly looking letters... make them stand up strong. They look like they are feeble and going to fall over. The FBSK is your best and the connections aren't working all that well.
     
  18. Strange Journeys

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  19. PETER

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    I was waiting for that.
     
  20. vems

    vems Senior Member

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    so im working on this throwback sek peice(was my old word i got arrested writing) and i went to re-outline a throwie i did not realizing it was ontop on this page and it bled through right where i wanted to do a vems peice above it, jus wondering what i shuld do to save it.(note: i still need to add the K where most the marks are, i figure once its all filled in it shuld look fine.) another question i have is, what do u guys think i shuld do for a fill? something crazy, or a simple 2/3 color fill...any advice is much apreciated. also ive been really trying to work on my bar consistancy, most of the effects are inside the actual letter.

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