Jetz and Block, tbh I see real potential, i can't say much that ian hasn't already. Chin up and keep writing bro

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Please flame the fuck out of that, tell me every detail you dislike about it and how I can better it.. I want to improve and I want people to be blunt, be constructive though.

 

its angled wierd, the letters seem to get bigger, is that an N or an H, the A is eh, could work, and the C is massive.

 

^what he said, definately work on keeping your letters evenly sized, idk if that first letter is an s or a c. if its an s bring that bottom part around more, if its a c lose that all together, second letter is just like a rounded square with 2 lines, thats no good, the a could be good if you work on it, make it more like puffy if you know what im saying, and bring it out more from behind that second letter, and i dont even know whats goin on with that last letter, its a gigantic blob type thing with a nondescript line runnin through it. shit needs major work bro

 

god i hate using pencils.. this any good?
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hey im new to site give some crits

 

bottom one.

simple letters, but with some style and flow. do more of the same.


completely ditch the two above it though. trash.

 

Newt your letters always get bigger as they go you need to work on that

 

thank's heaps bro, crit means a lot, i'll work on it heaps and repost it here, thanks heaps bud

oh and it is SNAC

 

heaps

 

Crits please. Just want to get it better. First attempted throwie too.

 

bliz - try to fallow a pattern at the top for each letter and try straigtening the letters out first then add the curve to the proper spot if needed build a graph behind the letters

 

Bliz: Just try and clean up the lines and fix the z.
SVC: Did you just tell him to build a graph behind the letters.....?

 

whoops my bad was thinkin grid lmao

 

what do u suggest for fixing the Z? All I could think is its kinda giant compared to the other letters

 

Don't steal the Z in this throwie alphabet, its just an idea for how you can change up the look of letters.

(Upper left set of letters)

 

I like some of those but I was kinda trying to come up with my own style. I wanted to make it sort of block up top and bubbly at the bottom.

 

Jester's throw is cool cuz it has style...

 

Mone in the first one i think you should kill the space between the N and E and on the M make it round like the rest of your letters