Chad, good shit.

Rems, you REALLY need to change your R on your pieces. it looks like SEMS. and also make all your letter the same width. your R is over powering everything. and dont ldo those little cuts on your letters if you know what i mean. just make all the lines smooth

 

i like your style, makes mine look like shit lol.

another random arrangement of letters. better? worse? meh?

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any advice on how to edit the R to make it look more like an R?
i really dig the beginning of it (the handle looking part on the top left and the whole loop) but i dont really dig the bottom extension...?

and ill try one without the cuts in a bit

thanks.

 

well your missing the entire left bar on the R so add that. its kinda essential

 

leaks are you in the round robin battle?

 

Rems rockin the Adam Bomb.. Your R does come off looking like a P or an S, depending on perspective, your E looks too small, and the M looks like an N in that red and blue one. The holes an openings in the green roller are too small. To make it look like an R, give it one of these.....R .....A left leg.
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Alta, the P's too fat, and the I's too small. You might want to make the S and M smaller to compensate for the size of the i. Your drop is better then before, though.

 

except shit talk...

and yeah zen you do.

 

and im not saying document your every graffiti move im saying document A graffiti move.... none of you post shit zen your flickr has had the same ten flicks for a thousand years.. and leaks ive never seen shit from you...



ive been drinking alot of beer lately..

 

automatically means i haven't been doing shit, right? i'll admit, i haven't been painting lately, but i've been tagging and putting up slaps. what have you been doing? painting more chill spots? sounds like you're really blowing up, dude.

 

forget everything else you just posted. practice and move on from this. it's a good start if you drew this by hand.

 

haha and why is that?

 

no, he's being serious. everything else you posted was garbage.

 

Because it's all wack, motherfucker ahhh

You wouldn't get any slack for posting stuff like this in the Intermediate thread.

 

simple exchange for blesr
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your letters are weak. the S an E are akward and the R is obnoxiously big. and your B should have D or O as holes. not both.

 

crits?

 

too dope, boz.

 

thanks man

 

That Z is on lock and that charac is dope too.