Tofe/chickens - bottom picture top piece is good, other 2 need some work, drop the arrows. work on the F structure, it doesnt have any right now. on some letters your usin bars and others your not, make sure you always use bars. work on those and you should notice a significant improvement. Akor - watch out for bar widths, i'd say don't shortchange your O, R needs a bit of work, and if your gonna have that line connecting the K and R don't tuck it behind the other legs of the letters. keep workin on it Remember Boys and girls, always rock yer simps fuck the shadow sloppy fuck the M
was up negroes just a quick sketch no pencil free styled spam clean up your simples dawg gasm idk try straiight letters there fun [/IMG]
zen no offence but you blow sike take ofence all you want i dont think you suck but that peice or whatever you put up did
sinkilla1- nice. pegcityboy - nice, keep doing simple's and then you can start breaking rules. __________ crits?
don t have such a long bar on your s the top right of the s make it shorter and try and not to make them so tall that it looks like ur strtching your letters but nice keep working
sin, that E has some potential. Tofe: im done giving you crits you dont listen to shit sezer: maybe don't do your bars so long but idk im feel like it would look good once you experiment with it more. spam: GOOD WORK! pink is my favorite.
wtf why you guys beefin on Umad? his shits totally legit, theres tons of different styles of graffiti and in his hes killin it. sure theres a few errors and if you cant read it Sesh then learn to. every style reads a different way. i know hes better then your stuff. and as for the tag i did, i know it was shit. thats why if you read what i wrote i said 'ignore the tag'. Umad - i think it looks pretty dope but yea the U is kinds whacked. the A's not too bad. Gasm - it aint to bad but i dont dig your M. make your A a little wider too. Tofe - the first ones cool but lose the extension on the bottom of your F. in the bottom pic i like the top piece. just dont curve the top of the T. overall i dont like 3d over letters. Spam - last ones a little sloppy, resize your A and M, keep bars same width too. Redo - i dig this piece. extend your R leg and dont disconnect the bar on the D Sezr - work on your letter structure a little more, theyd be dope.
naw nigguh juss going through some rough times i hit some shit last night ima have pics soon i hope lol
That shit is sick. I love the color choices, and the white stuff stabbing through the top of the k. I took pictures of some freestyles I found looking through my books: View attachment 555114
1-too skinny 2-the last a being turned around makes it look like an e n the ovals for dots in letters idea u have goin is dope, just not on those letters cuz they r too skinny 3-finish it 4-good throwie 5-d looks like an a same thing again with the last a lookin like an e but overall just work with it 6-ur best 1, i dig it all around, now redo it n color it 7-bars r f'ed
The 5th sketch has the most potential and don't do the last a backwards, thats whack as fuck. if you want symmetry use capital letters. I'd honestly say do regular letters, like this AGENDA untill you can make those clean.
crits on style/letters isnt really what im after these r sketches i colored since i never color shit sharpies/decos/prismas/elmers painters r what i use currently n below is my blender ne crits/suggestions on COLORING gr8ly appreciated *i know my 3d highlights r currently wack* [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10977.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10966.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10967.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10968.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10969.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10970.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10971.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10972.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10974.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10975.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10976.jpg
only ones i really like are the 2nd and 4th. 2nd because of the colors and 4th because its simple, but why is there a black blob where the 3d should be? and whats that on the 2nd one, is that a frog sticker or somethin?