never done a sctrach but those are sexy.

 

Octopus- Only thing I wanna point out is the lower case t. Kinda throws off the flow when it goes upper upper lower upper
Flow- Gotta fuck with it man. Hell for now since you aint goin out just steal some letters and get the idea of doin different shit with it.
Scone- Looks dope bro. Like the S alot
Zone- I personally dont like the idea of scratchin. So Id say no
Grofl, Grfl, Grfwlkjelkje?- Lose the halo, the quotes, and then work on the actual letters and style.
Anoer- Looks aight man. Maybe its time to start addin to it now.
Cas- Looks like death metal handstyle or some ish. Go rounder lol

New name. Crits? Just fuckin around with a wilder style.

 

no offense ,but it sucks.

 

Sage- The point is to have it readable.
Joker - Lose the halo and quotes. Letter connections look weird.
Scone- Digging your letters the underline doesnt look very clean.
Tier- Sick flares

Heres a flick of my stuff. I know the names taken by a legend...in Europe??.. Cant find any flicks though, just a couple on art crimes. Plan on sticking a number on it anyways. Can I get some helpful crits.....

 

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crits??

Ink me- pretty dope.
Sage- clean it up a little bit it looks like you just scribbled.

 

Cas- the orange one is better than the jaggy black ones
Poet- I like the way that the p and t frame the sides, just make sure you don't crush that e... and don't put a number on there just because you think the fags on bsci are gonna give you shit...

 

I never work on my handstyle so could someone help me out?

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LOL ^ taggin' the bathroom! I'd be impressed if you did it in the girls room.

 

been there, done that

as i said in another thread.. pissing and writing at the same time is mad refreshing

eskimo, the best way to work on your hands are fill up note book pages and watch it develop/.. mad people have told me that..

 

scrap- thats a white out tag cause i love em lol... looks good
cas- move ur s closer to the a and do something so they dont look like regular letters
poet- i like it, add style to the t.. you know?
and eskimo just repitition
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thanks for the feedback! Here's my second stab at it.

 

yo fool what you write i might be able to help not to say im the best but you know.i dont suck....

 

damn i hella got fix it thanx 4 the heads up

anoer nice E best advice is to trick out the R now that ur keyboard letters are good

 

i just went through a few pages of this shit.... why is bak talking like he is good? talking down to rapist handies? fuck man rapist might not be king shit but he burns you, no doubt.

 

I like this better with the fine tip.

REPETITION

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i would lose the extension on the top of the p

 

Flow: I like the "FL" in the tag under your backwards throwie, but the O is too small, and that W is sloppy.
The F of your other tags looks nice too, but that L is goofy, and I don't like the hovering O.

Repetition: Yeah, the extension looks odd, and the circle for the dot on the i's makes the ti look like a P.
Your R and N are awesome though.

 

about 5% of saturdays action
i've gone simple
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