@Toopski, I agree with Skope2's crits for the most part. I don't mind the triangular cuts, but I think that the U is too small compared to the S and is too hidden by the S too. The S overlaps it in two places; you should have made the U overlap it in one of those instead. I guess that's personal preference though. But keep it up, it's looking solid.

@Aeso, man, don't start thinking about symmetry until you get your letters down because it will end up just hindering you. Keep doing simples and once you get some style/structure, then consider doing something symmetrical if you still want. And like you said, a bunch of the lines are off, especially down on the 3D.

 

don't use a ruler.

 

Tails and a sketch.

 

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Exchange for SER, sorry it took forever, also looks like shit. top line above the E isn't effect. these shitty sharpie pens blow out a ton

 

@FlatScank, I'm digging the tails, but I'd lose the extensions on the F, L and T of the sketch. Or change them at least; for some reason I'm just not feeling them, but then again I can't place my finger on why and I guess it's personal preference. Also I hate seeing that shit you did with the bottom of the A. It's so overplayed and lacks so much originality. Fuck. But for the most part it is a pretty solid sketch and I like your style.

@DaFugg, I'm not loving it but if you keep working with that style, it will start looking good. It's also not your usual word. The E just seems awkward for some reason, and the top part of the S is the only real curved part of the whole thing... well I guess the right part of the R is curved too, but basically it lacks consistency. You made the top of the E and the R match, but the top of the S is completely different, which throws it off a bit.

 

Thanks guys, The curved bars were cause that's something that I feel I need to work on. My next goal is consistency, which seems to get me every time.

 

The U and the S are bang on, the E from the DE would've fit better, and the R just blows.

 

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Screwing around, I'm so fucking stuck...
The purple and yellow markers started to fucking bleed, ugh... shitty markers = ftl.

 

I like the last one. I know he's supposed to be a tadpole, but I couldn't help but imagine him having a chainsaw bottom lip. lol, but in all reality your letter structure is crap. start over. Progress.

 

whats up flat, i see your crew spark a lil light of fire in that belly, do your thing! stay wit it.
ummmmm i ono im 2 lazy to go back n comment on all y'all but yesterday was tupac birthday so I put together a piece in memory of his life. here it go. hope you like it.

 

Tempo- go alott simpler for now
Erk- cant really crit that, but i would work on the E

got bored so i fucked around with these things you call markers...

those thin sharpie markers suck dick at keeping a consistent line.

 

Quickie for a friend.

 

I like it. the YC is knda boring but those are tough as it is lol.

 

dank that is sooo good.
I have a hard time with curves n all that. yakno

 

fine liner sharpies/Micro tips? you just have to get used to em, you gotta apply the perfect amount of pressure and have a smooth hand. If you push down too hard it fucks em up

@nouv clean as always, C got a lil chubby at the bottom

 

imo it didnt get chubby enough to match the L and E

 

spmething i scetched for my crew, crits?

 

Ditch those arrows.