taz i really like the one with the orange outline, not really much to crit on it but i wouldn't have bended the lines of the top of the letters

cose if everyone would listen to crits like you do everyone would improve way faster, nice work like the letters and i like your second "e" best

slek i think you overdid it with those silver big drips

upstate the second "leg" of your N should come a little lower, other than that i'm loving it

grafyk i totally agree with black flag
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tips or pointers?

 

sorry for double post

 

dunsy dny at the bottom of second one is solid.

 

Getting back into graff with a new name,
Crits please.
ill crit you guys also once i get onto my computer.

Very Bad one i think hte brown shading in hte back looks horid.
but crits anyone?

 

Gimme some feedback?

New to the game, I've got a tag (i think) and a first piece to show....anyhow, here they are, straight from my blackbook.

 

jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesus christ
don't mean to be rude but i'll be blatant it's awful check out the new to graff thread

drop all arrows an go simple

 

fathem, lose arrows, learn about lettering/bars, go simple.

anyways

crits, should i develop a style yet or stick to writing basic letters...either way im staying simple until i get basics...when should i develop a throw?

by the way i know i fucked up on second w bad and s is a lil big and comp...

 

snaw stick to basics, you're improving though.

 

If your just starting try to start out simple, i like your style so far, just work on your tag its a little sloppy.

Snaw- ill help you out and give you advice this weekend or later but so far so guud.

 

This page makes me cry.

 

? are badness dont amaze u?

 

It amazes me as much as your grammar does.

 

critssss

 

well, i kinda thought thats the feedback id get...just figured id give it a shot. thanks for the help, ill be postin in a while for more help.

 

OH and gam, thx for at least being respectful....hope that youll help me out a little more in the futuer?

 

Dont worry about it, just keep trying, remeber you cant get worse if you practice. Just keep posting your stuff.

 

i tried hard. i posted in intermediate but i feel like it's in between here and there.

 

Sir go way simpler. The S on the first one is hurtin. it gets way too skinny in the middle.

Gam use bars to make your letters. They go from really skinny to really fat. and i can tell you didnt use bars for your letter structure.

Fathem, what mostly everyone says, go simpler and start off really basic. your lines are also a bit sketchy and choppy. Someone told me to use your wrist as a hinge to draw cleaner and straighter lines.

Snaw you're really working on it a low eh? Glad to see you keep trying over and over. But you should fatten up the S

keep it up