dirty dozen dont waste stickwes with that.... do it on paper more

 

i like the first one shayk nice and big. stay up u got mad potential

 

^^ agreed, first and second are my favs.

 

that shits huge dude i took like 5 full steps on each letter haha and its on the onlystore in my town but im like 10 min away from a small ass city. thank you guys for the good crits by the way i was working so damn hard to get somethin going for me

 

yea, i sorta went through my notebook and ran out of paper, but i just found like 2 blank pages so heres some more..crappy experiments

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You think that would look nice on some stickers?

as you can see, im still tryin to get somethin goin for me, ha, hopefully ill get somethin soon

 

not to sound like a dick but no toy stuff looks good on stickers in my opinion lol. just keep at it with pen/pencil/marker and paper
work with bars instead of freehandin AGES. go one nice strait parallel bar at a time. dont be in such a rush

 

kk, thanks

 

Shayk I would say blackbook for a little bit more, props on gettin up and great work, but the one thing that annoys me in those is the big space in the 'a'.

Becuase in the rest of your throw there's no spaces, and then there's just somethin in the middle...kind of changes the letter style when you do that...

But sick work man! Keep it up!

 

i feal the same way im working on that right now

 

try not to experiment, just stick with good clean letter structure. Imo a good simple tag/throwie is better then a toy trying to go crazy, trippin overhimself. Not trying to bring ya down, but trust us, start simple.

 

hahah
thats funny business you planning on doing with my speech lmao...

and for ur stuff keep doin ur thing, work wit ur lettering a bit more.. get the shape of the letters and shit...

 

I tried doing it simple..yea i know i sort of made the S too small
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that wuld be sick for a roller, probably not for anything else though

 

Much better. See how the a and the g are nice and structured, they look good together and have the same thickness. Simple and clean. Go get a blackbook from michaels and fill it up haha just don't get ahead of yourself.

 

wow that was gay all my paint pens decided to stop working at the same time. im working on makeing it not so sharp.



damn dirtydozen you really are out of papper huh? what are you wrighting in?

 

lol thx for the crits guys, ima be workin on this shit at skool today too aha
and that green one was on an old agenda thing i found in my room. ima need to go buy some of those cheap ass wide rule notebooks today

 

Fuck i gotta work on my throwie it sucks ass.

 

good for you

 

I'm changing my name real soon.
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