that C on that cher is bangin. im feelin that saint sketch, that second note block is dope too. and that face kayone did is bangin. really feelin the anglin an expression of her face. the roses are bangin too. i know them shits are hard to get right
i used the wrong skin tone color, i made her a lil toooo morena. i might have to start all over. fuck. [Broken External Image]:http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/6201/dscf2748.jpg
yea i dont do script at all haha so that shit took forever and u can see the final product. just tryin to do stuff out my usual
honestly i like that bottom one alot...im sure keeps word means alot more but still it doenst look bad
im not hating on it...there is just a whole bunch wrong with it and you can tell right away at first glance that there you were wingin' it...some things to work on , 1. the arc of the phrase needs to follow tha same path... 2. the letters need to be properly spaced 3. the letters all need to have the same directional flow and all be proportional with one another 4. all of your extentions need to make sense ,as in where they are coming from, and where they grow thicker around tha bends... these are just things that make a script look nicer, and more proper although there is no exact way to make it look..these guidelines, if you will, will help you get a more solid grasp on scriptlike lettering and how to make it look more pleasing to the eye Keep it up...your off to a good start....its good to see you stepping outside your comfort zone..that will benefit you in the long run in more aspects than just script..it will help your understanding of flow and proportion no matter what type of lettering your doing
going through an old box of shit an came across this sketch i did up for a painting i later did for an art show...not really graffiti related but figured id post it cuz it was in my book
Some old script shit...most of you have seen these, sorry for posting them again... for tha homie NOTE For my clothing line random EVIL lettering I know i have one on an arc like how you have yours 'This' ,but its on another computer... this is the only image i could find of it...its small and hard to see, plus its doubled up in colours which makes it harder to distiniguish the arc on its own not saying mine are perfect..in fact there is alot i personally hate about them that i would change......just showing what ive learnt to 'THIS' to maybe help him out a little
yo keeps thanks bro..thats gonna help alot. i most def winged it from jump but script is something i would like to work on. i had alot of trouble keeping all the letters the same with the same extentions i think i went in with the whole graff mentality and gave every letter its on thing haha