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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. essen

    essen Member

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    shit well i guess i won't write sense anymore lol
     
  2. St3vO

    St3vO Member

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  3. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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  4. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  5. St3vO

    St3vO Member

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    @Tofe
    Not really feeling the style you got going with the first one. Maybe its just the T. Straight letters look good, a few bars are a bit off but you probably know that.

    @DeSeR
    That style has some nice potential. Reeeeally not liking that S tho, if it wasn't for that I would say its pretty dope.
     
  6. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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    what don't you like about the S?
     
  7. St3vO

    St3vO Member

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    It's undefined and looks squished, too block like and small and the other letters just seem to have a different style. This could be what you were going for, in which case it's just my personal preference. Not trying to diss your style at all, I can tell you are probably much better than I am, I just think it would look sick with a different S.
     
  8. brG

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  9. xXABEONEXx

    xXABEONEXx Senior Member

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    that sucks seekr is takn, how about kron? :D

    [Broken External Image]:http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/1889/003ig.jpg

    and thanx to weak and the rest of u for the crits. i appriciate the feedback.

    and that face was fairly dificult with only stock rusto caps. :p
     
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  10. xXABEONEXx

    xXABEONEXx Senior Member

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    brg, the e on the els is a staight bite off moan one's "angie" peice bra, at least change styles a little bit if ur gonna bite shit... just my 2 cents...
     
  11. brG

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  12. AMERO

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  13. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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    first leg is weird^


    smoke and draw all day erry day cuz i dun givah fuck
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  14. AMERO

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    good shit brah
     
  15. PREA672

    PREA672 Elite Member

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    or cus you dont have a job ^

    no hate.. dope style!
     
  16. *Patch!

    *Patch! Senior Member

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    fuckin around with a euro/ meko style lol. havent sketched in so long

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  17. AMERO

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    I don't really feel that thing on the "m"

    *edit* it would be better without the lump on the "m" ;)
     
  18. *Patch!

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    this is what i came up with after i took some sleeping pills. it didnt turn out so good lol.

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  19. *Patch!

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    St3vo- Your N is really the only letter i like out of that piece, i think you're bending your bars too much and it just doesnt seem to flow well
    Tofe- Your first sketch is probably the best, keep tweeking your simples to make em pop
    Cyto- im not really a fan, if you hadnt posted what it said i probably wouldnt be able to read it. The end ER are good to me but the beginning just seems too forced and im not feeling it. 3d and lines are good but the lines look like they bled a bit. I suggest using ballpoint pens or a "Vellum Writer", Your blue and white one is tight tho
    BrG- I think you should go back too bars, your letters arent structurized well enough
    Abe- I think you're trying to go for a style thats a little too complex, not saying you cant pull it off but you'll probably need to keep practicing

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    i think i'm all caught up on crits for you guys now throw em my way lol. AAAAAAAAAAnd you guys should post more if you wanna get better. Naw im sayinnn?
     
  20. St3vO

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    Patch.

    You got straight letters down although I'm not a big fan of the blocks on the top of your A and the left bar of your M. But you obviously know how to use your bars. Throw some style into that shit