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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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    guys mind crti'ing the ones i posted earlier i really want some help on throws
     
  2. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    nice tits sneez hah!
     
  3. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    @mc satan just keep practicing

    @mase you sir are correctomundo
     
  4. centrysam

    centrysam Senior Member

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    @ mase its a throwup on paper its just fuckin around . i try to do differnt things an sometimes it dont work out , thats why it was on paper anyways

    @emace.... since no one else will give u a sensible crit . i guess i will try , i think if u show more of the N instead of covering it with the E ,, and shape the O a little better ... also maby if the left side of the g was a little more square it might flow better .... just suggestions .
     
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  5. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    ^^ haha i saw that and was like "uh? those arent Mc Satan's letters?"
    anyways @Mc Satan im in the same spot ur in, but one thing i can tell u is that ur P covers the H too much

    crits please
    ewal throw.JPG
     
  6. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    Heres a nasty angled flick on a weird stone wall
    ay yo ewal that A is way to diproportionate, basically make everything proportionate actually. got some flava rockin though

    crits
     
  7. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    D and T, pronounce them both more. For your T you should have both triangle parts on it to make it no doubt a T ya digg? right now it looks like a carrot or a C. Also dont put that 3d on the U thats over the T
     
  8. IbuprofenTablets

    IbuprofenTablets Banned

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    Him shading that part in actually matches the dropshadow he laid out, 'cause that would have been where the T came down. Further, as we all know, if it's shown, a dropshadow needs to worked in, if applicable.

    Also, I think I know what you wrote before what you write right now, Debut.
    Your steez has definitely improved, props.

    A few gripes with it, though:
    1. The E is huuurt. Make it a simple one, 'cause it would imo, compliment the rest of the throw. Idk, maybe throw in a u as the eye.
    2. Idk, that little notch on the top of the B looks out of place, scrap that.
    3. Look around for inspiration on D's 'cause I think it would add a bit more spark to your throw; your D's a bit boring. Ohhh, make the dot on the bottom right part of your D, maybe add another U as the eye, or do one of those Augor hole things.

    Just my two cents, 'cause I think I see what style you're attempting.



    Yeah, add the triangle thing like Reach suggested too.
     
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  9. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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  10. bak

    bak Senior Member

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    ewal just keep practicing that thro. the more u do it the more ull structure each letter.

    shits n giggles
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  11. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    is it just me or do we have some real similar throw styles?
    I kinda looked at that flick and went "SHIT, I do not remember drawing these!" heh.
    for crits, maybe practice your hand movements to make em more fluid so that you dont get none of those shakey lines no more. you can get with some good flows once your lines are nice and clean
     
  12. bak

    bak Senior Member

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    thanks man. yea i seen a different flick of urs nd noticed some similarities.
    yea my problem is gettin each letter to b the same size (not go small to big) nd the shakeyness too
    but based on that..which s is more solid? top or bottom?
     
  13. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    i vote bottom one
     
  14. centrysam

    centrysam Senior Member

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    i think the bottom is the better toss .... but both are nice .. good work
     
  15. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    new name...jerm,germ i know the hand style sucks but lmk bout the throw
     
  16. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    haha steezy T on the SWEETS. likin it.
     
  17. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    but it can be mistaken for a C... careful
     
  18. Lado

    Lado Senior Member

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  19. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Definitely stick with Lado.
     
  20. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    get rid of the crease in the bottom of the S on the first one, should make it a bit better.