just fool around with it a little...try adding some style to each letter individually, but keep the pattern going throughout. Then throw it all together...ya know..just simple stuff...try to bring a shadow into it..just add some dimension

 

@Barks, The stickers you've done with Decos are pretty bad, sorry to say. Work on pen control with Decos. Looks like theres alot of unwanted line thickness all over em and they look pretty shakey. Your throwie (If you did it cleanly) On the first three would've looked good, the last picture's letter structure just hurts to look at, sorry to say.

 

The first three are bad also.

 

Yeah, 9 times out of ten,
if your throw is attached to the ground
it doesn't look very good.

 

any better?

 

barely. stop makin wavy lines. clean round or straight lines. and get a notebook stop wastin your slaps

 

anyone wanna xchange?

 

the reall con smart

 

shitty little throw ups

 

If you know yourself that their shitty then why post em up on slaps?

 

yeah barks dont even fuck with the shadow until youve got your letter in good condition

[Broken External Image]:http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/SDC13908.jpg
a page from a while back

 

that stickers in my book
and i felt like using my stickers...

 

hows this? lol
tried new letters kinda
i dont really like it

 

I tried to use bars. Crits please.

 

Srry put it in wrong thread

 

Crits. there will be more to come.

 

i think that says smarf not smart...but anyways, I think I might have to change my name today caz i saw a piece that said cons on a train passing by....but my name is con (no s) so do I have to change my name?

 

neet- simple looks dec, but loose the dots on the throwie. the shadow is a bit sketchy too
sense - loose the swirls