dope but not feelin tha leg on the R its to thin fatten it

 

gasr - im feelin that shit man. dope

 

i kno this shit is wack right now but this is jus a new idea i got for a throw
anyone got any ideas what i should do with it?

 

gasr - see if you can add something where the leg of the "r" is. the big black spot doesn't look good.

vandal - get rid of the space between the letters.

 

J-one, that's sick
Vandal, I think the spaces add some kind of character to it

 

gasr - im not feeling your A, and fix up the leg of the R like everyone else said. pretty dope other than that though

 

the vandalism in art-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zMDVuceFyO8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zMDVuceFyO8

 

gasR- DOPE

 

Camel, so clean

I am going to do the fill tonight with these nice markers I just picked up.

 

deck, make your D more rounded so it matches the rest of the letters.

 

Deck are u trying to make a throwie? When making letters, don't take your pencil off the paper and go for smooth curves if thats how you want to flow it but a combo that you're using doesn't work son. Make shapes and create letters from the shapes, don't try to make letters that looks like shapes know what I mean?

 

I just filled it, that will be the last time I colour it in all the way with these things. But I think they are refillable so +.

 

trying something new..

crits please

 

no way your writing dozer that would be so gay

 

Who gives a shit, he's probs gonna change his word half a dozen times before he settles like most people, anyway.

 

i fucked the E crits please

 

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Workin on ma flow.
Cyto- looks like you on the right path man.
deck- keep praticeing your simples, and throws and stuff.
swine - looks uneven and a bit unproportionate.
dozer- looks alright man could be fresh if you work on it.

 

Bumping

 

...^ loosee all of those extention and wierd crap do your letters just curve the bars if you have to