Sak i think.

 

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i got lazy with the side of the box so i just drew 2 king size sharpies

 

Why oh why did i do addons.


JUST CHILLIN - Dont Bend, Keep Consistent Bar Widths, Do More Keyboard Letter Simples.
GRATE- It looks like most throwups to be fair. you should use bars more as its really quite bubbly.
Blunted Round The Clock - I can dig the first one a little, but the second one looks abit inconsistent in places and i can't actually tell what the full word is...
Darko- thats a cereal box ? good idea maybe but your letters need to be big and need to have better bar work... read the new to graffiti thread cause that looks like your designing something for school.

 

you gotta outline that 3d

 

mani work more simpler,your bars and the letters looks not stable.
very nice sketch you got there bob
keep it coming

 

crit my shitttt already

 

the arrow at the bottom is totally unneccesary.
simples ok but the bottom of the loop on the P is inconsistant compared to the loop on the A.
Do more keyboard style letters.

 

bump

 

your handstyle is beyond terriible
and what is the point of a cerial box?

 

maybe you should add
'dosent understand alternative art'
to that pothead list of yours

 

nice letters,
color it,

 

ahahahahahahahahha if that alternative art you can add me to the list to.

The box isent even straight, and i cant even read your handstyle. Not to sound mean but dont try shit thats way harder then your drawing ability, Start overly simple then work from there.

 

thank you^^
mofo its called a ruler which makes straight lines

 

You're a fag
your cerial box is shit there's nothing art about crooked lines and a broken handstyle

Besides I'm pretty sure stoners understand art better than the normal person.

 

I don't want to be that kid that calls everyone out on biting thir shit, especially since it's a pretty simple style....but any chance my 'M's were the inspiration for this?? looks a bit similar...

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bending shit more and more connecting things , I'm hyped on it but you guys tell me how much it sucks hah atleast I'm tryin[/QUOTE]

i love how i stay giving my opinion/crit on shit and never get shit back

fuckin rip it apart already

 

I'd lose the thing betwen the top of the E and K. And fix the part on the R that wou.ld be rounded in the keyboard form of the leter, like top right. Top 'arm' of the K could be doing something more intereseting too. I like the bottom of the R and K the whole E though.

 

I see the similarities in m's,kaiser fancy critting me ? top of page.