[Broken External Image]:http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/1787/p8163880.jpg HIP-HOP its been a couple months sense i have done anything but i dont think i lost nothing but i dind't gain anything either i gotta clean it up an finish it but how it look so far?? turkey- shit is whack do simples rip- you got the right idea fer sure just keep at it
some shit i'm workin on i like the S but im not so crazy about the p i think i'm gonna shorten the bar that comes str8 down on the s
Tryin to be Simple Let me know if it seems like too much is goin on with my letters. I dont know I just dont seem amused unless its got some like arms or arrows or somethin to it
blacktodafuture- make the top of the S more notice able, i could barely tell it was an S, also loose all connections you have, dont do those for awhile longer, or until you're bomb at simps. hopefully that helps
peg-looks like a good start, finish it and ill have more to say predator- keep trying, you'll feel like its boring at first, but once you get it youll start getting more amused than you ever did. blacktodafuture- i can't see yours. sheltr- i dont like that kind of style, so i cant give any tips/crits trest- your piece gets smaller as you go on, try making two straight lines on the page and keeping the piece inside those lines to help you. been told these belong in here. View attachment 503669 View attachment 503670
skeez just clean it up a bit and make sure all the shadows go to the same focal point your close, but no cigar. and the o could use some reworking and i like the background you did to it the second is alright, but the r dosnt quite pop as much as the t or e do
id sya calm it down a little donald. go proper. give no one nothing to bitch about. n abandon that star thing
[Broken External Image]:http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/9326/p8163886.jpg HIP-HOP letters are finished i hate the whole HOP but oh well crits?? and any ideas for a background? donald- just watch your proportions and if i were you i would loose those little curly ends on all your shit
stuck- on the first one im feeling the d v o and r the E just throws it off for me looks scrunched. and on the second one the V looks to plain, all your letters have small extension except for the V makes it look out of place. mayb try an extension to the left on the top left side or something, i can see youre experimenting from all the eraser marksand thats good. it means you'll progress fast. just keep at it and youll get there. working on an exhcange ill have up later.
diggin those devor simples. skeetz pretty much summed up everything, and aside from that i just think your handstyles need work, but those always have room for improvement haha.
[Broken External Image]:http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/3529/p8173890.jpg its all done well i might throw in some other shit i dunno crits?? devor- lookin good you know how to use bars watch your proportions and stuff though