I did this for a friend chad. [Broken External Image]:http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/2938/0822090123.jpg
well, the pic is kinda small, but from what i can make out, it looks pretty good. i re-did the vapor sketch. i think i need to bring the part of the v up a little more. crits anyways? [Broken External Image]:http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/8266/62531198644679777103831.jpg
prety wack [Broken External Image]:http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/DSC00357.jpg
Give 'em to get 'em bub. That goes to everyone in this thread. Seriously, this shit's going nowhere unless you people learn to crit properly.
block- the a and f look alright. the s and e look odd. unsuccessful- i would like to see a more direct shot of them cuz they look nice
something i did in class. was really bored and decided to try out the arrow wildstyle bullshit. this is the first time i tryed it and it looks horrible haha. just wanted to see what feedback i got.
Future your letter have no FLOW what soooooo ever......Try this. Dad a Str8 line from one side to the other. and keep your letters on that line when keeping them pointed in the same direction. LA- Dont ever do that again man..........Thats isn't concidered a wild style......Even if you throw arrows on it is considered Non-Knowledgeable. In other words MEGA toy. Get what I mean....Start with letters that come from your keyborad. also if you want to see some style that are wild. Go look at the BB section...(Big Boy in the Picture thread) And their you go. Wild doesn't necessarily mean arrows, you can be unique too remember that.
alright thanks i will try that, idk, no one has ever explained flow to me, all ive heard it"flow is like the rhyme to your letters" so are you basically saying that i should not let the letters go below the line and have them pointing in the same direction, such as if the S is point right, so do all the other letters have to point right? any more explanations would be great, and i do give crits, quite often, i would just like some so i can learn and improve.
LA I really don't understand it, but i see where your coming from, try to straighten out some of those lines, get rid of the wavy shit. Sit down and look at what you did, then try to redraw it and make it better! Backtothefuture, that piece of paper looks alot better from when you started! Havok: Chad should be stoked, that shit is tight
Destroy LA. No. Arrows do not equal wildstyle. I'd tell you to go simpler, but thwen I'd just be a hypocrite, because I need to do the same. Colrz. Your coloring and background looks good, but work on that letter structure.. Murphy's law...I like it, but it belongs in the "other art" thread. Unsuccesful..looks good...like the throw.. Safe...not bad simples...part of the problem with the flow I think is the A has some rounded/curved bars, the other letters are all straight. Work on the handstyle too. Still coloring this....go simple, I know....Just about every marker I touched this with started to die...thats how I ended up with the wack fill... View attachment 505215 And I posted these in intermediate, but forgot to put them here.. View attachment 505216 View attachment 505217 Crits??