EDIT: Can't see your picture Halo~ My shit is the first and last two! Other shit is homies View attachment 505829 View attachment 505830 View attachment 505831 View attachment 505832 View attachment 505833 View attachment 505834 View attachment 505835 View attachment 505836 CAN YOU GYS SEE MY SIGNATURE
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/BackofBlackBook.jpg Queezy slap right there is so damn attractive. The first picture I'm having troubles, I see two S's and I can't really find the D. It would've looked better if you blended your colors together. Not liking the 'fuck the buff' page. Pudg ones are pretty nice. Nothing to say about the block buster, The first to last Quezy needs to have more consistancy in letter widths. The Q E and Y are all small widths compared to the U and Z.
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/BackofBlackBook.jpg Queezy slap right there is so damn attractive. The first picture I'm having troubles, I see two S's and I can't really find the D. It would've looked better if you blended your colors together. Not liking the 'fuck the buff' page. Pudg ones are pretty nice. Nothing to say about the block buster, The first to last Quezy needs to have more consistancy in letter widths. The Q E and Y are all small widths compared to the U and Z.
edit: I would say work on your letters a little bit more until you use faces. Brin the bottom leg of the e down a little more to match and possibly angle it 45 degrees, and throw a drop shadow or 3-d. Also you have the letter to the left covering the next one besides the E. Thanks for the good critiques man, it's hard to get around here. I feel you on the width of my letters on the bomb, I said fuck it and sketched it anyways. The first one says squid, it's just a little funkadelic.
Krep: Work on your hand style, don't add faces just yet. Nice straight letters, now throw in some of your own style to the structures, not too much though, just a few tweaks here and there.
does the ice cream cone have letters in it?? i honestly cant read anything you posted so start over and go simple.
redid an old sketch i found from when i used to write more. helpin me get back into it. still cant think of a name to write tho. i might just go with SMEC [Broken External Image]:http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/2386/smec.jpg crits/
smec - cant see those letters so well... possibly simplify? the strange one - go simple crits? any ideas what to do with my K??? coloured, gay ass K
emek- i think it would look better if the e didnt cover up the m so much gore- learn how to draw 3d delae- looks ok keep your lines straighter smec- not feeling that style looks kindof goofy [Broken External Image]:http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/7e/f0/fa7de402f002.jpg hows this?
bore- lacks flow. try not making your bars into triangles. the top of your B and R are too big in proportion to the bottom
neet 1st one is good last 2 suck... simple bars broooooooooo, wait till the time comes to peice, just work with the straight letters and simples