ktrl- make the k and r the same size as the t and l change those bottom right bars. drop the bubbles, work on simples and straight letters like this
some other straight letters, better i think. View attachment 521708 i know the R is fucked in this one haha. View attachment 521709
top ones good. in the bottom one your k is too big and your r is too small and retarded. also your vertical bar for your l is a bit skinny.
yoo! i forgot how to set back a clock! for halloween time change..........., if its 10;50 then would the time be 9;50? and for the alram is set to 7;00 would it be 6?
Makes sense the drop shadow should be there on the R and the top of the S I needed to make more rounded but I wanted to keep the same flow amoung the tops for everything.
Letters are weak, your line work is not very good, colour scheme for the fill is not very good either, and the 'W' doesn't look right and the 'S' is too far away from the rest of the stuff... But what do I know I'm gay ain't i ?
Rinse - Nice simples man, i think you need to tweak the S a bit more make it fit with the other letters, also it looks like your R is a few steps ahead of the other letters try and get them all on the same level, and it will be dope. Snaw- Its not too bad could do with some work but on the whole its alright, the N and A are your strongest letters, so work on your s and w. Halloween sketch, a bit late. View attachment 521760