hahahaha woony
RES-ur missing a little shadow underneath the hook of the e, i dont know if thats what u were goin for but ur letters get bigger as i goes on so if u could make it all the same size it would be dope...over all i like it

 

RES- your shadows are super uneven and inconsistent

 

Crits?

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So? Maybe he doesn't want it to be straight cause people are tired of straight line's and he wanted to try something new?

Otherwise RES, I Really like the style, the Bottom K on the left should be more fatter but it's totally up to you, TBH I can't wait to see you colour this cause it look's good, keep it up man.

CERONE- It's okay, but I'd like to see some other piece's for you otherwise I don't know what to say. Just wait for more crit's from other people otherwise then from myself.

 

thanks, tbh i dont really know what he was taliking about. i know its wrong inside the letters for example but i dont see how its uneven

and cerone, do normal letters i can see what your trying to do but its a bit over the top

 

He's talking about your drop shadow, d00d.

 

Its a sexy drop shadow though, right? I might put up more stuff later.

 

yea, i know but hows it uneven

 

Oh, I was talking about my shadow, yours looks great dude, I really like it, keep it up

 

havent sketched or posted in forever crits are always helpful

resik fix your r and k in my opinion and get your shadow more consistant
cerone your e's look really weird in my opinion

 

Resik-Its wrong you got a shadow that goes down in some areas left for most of the piece and then a random one on the right of the K. you need to study up on your shadowing buddy.
Cer-im no fan of wiggly lines like that, its up to you but my crit is to make solid lines till u got style.
Meds-all your letters look like their from different pieces, and the fill is no good. also put the whole in that D to make it defined.

 

Cer, that drop shadow IS fucking sexy. Now you just need some good simples to put it to. haha.

 

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new style...i couldnt figure out a way to do the r,crits?

 

trying to make my calligraphy into something... still working it but feedback is welcome

says sear... and no im not going back to simples... lol

 

Kew - I don't like the side extensions. Try some 3D.
Sear - I don't see the E?

 

pookie that shit is nuts but i think its a lil too nuts just tone it down a bit. i like the idea tho

 

pookie-that shits intense, i dont even know what to say
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better R?...crits?

 

just wanna bump for some more crits...
sevr- i dont really like that little spike on the top of the S, the R looks ok somethign about it makes me '???' though
pookie- uhhhhh i can barely read that lol but im fucked up right now ;/
kew- that extension on the right makes it look like it says KEWL ha...just a thought keep it in mind maybe make that E just a little bigger too...and add some 3d for flare.