Why does nobody give crits anymore? there are people on this page posting pics and asking for crits without giving crits and this thread is going to go nowhere if everyone never wants to give any advice Give crits to get crits Blunder- First pic im not really feeling the letters they look a little sloppy. 2nd pic has the best letters imo but lose the background. 3rd pic is cool. Dusk- Get rid of the blob on the top right of the D. The K isnt that terrible just keep messin with it. Tofe- The throw looks pretty good but the letters below dont seem to ever change. character dosent really fit. Werm- I would lose the extension on the M. The E and M look a little small compared to the W and R Made- Cool idea but fix the 3d and neatin it up a little bit. Kane- Looks pretty good, keep messing around with different letters
I was not referring to you then, I was referring to the majority of the people here who do not. but why did you bump to the same page you had it posted?
AHEK - is that a R or an A Dusk - is meh, look at throwie thread Stigma - I like Needs to be finished
my handstyle is getting really sloppy moving away from the first letters i learned... im gunna try to learn calligraphy styles as a basis
Stigma dude your shits actually looking alot better from the shit i seen wit romik and others bro looking alot cleaner, letters are simpler and getting easier to read bro keep at it
the wire thing ruins it, i like the t and d, try to match the rest, work proportions and all that stuff..
instead of having that wire wrapping around it, you can integrate it as a part of the fill, you'll see what I mean once the sketch 4 a battle I'm doing with nouveauP gets posted. I did an effect similar to that. your letters need a little more work, you're almost there though. keep going add a 3D or a shadow and have that dripping border envelop both words without keeping a space between them. that space could've been filled with a 3D going into the center. and give these drips flow. they look bad like that.
rin- not feeling the r personally kew- aim for more defined barbed wire if youre gonna do that. at first glance i saw ants or bees or some shit. crits would be appreciated. sloppy and bad colors. also i am now aware theres a writer with this name but whatever, crits anyway View attachment 580548