nemor- what do you mean by negative space smoke- okay, so you mean like this? (crits also please) i know that the "line" is going smaller to bigger, its just a small sketch.
Half of you have good solid sketches. if they were painted well they would be straight. quit buying into this online forum bs and getting caught up in the hype of sketching. half the dudes burning you know do not sketch. if you painted more and sketched less you would improve lightyears faster. get out of your sketchbooks and go paint. do chill bridges and tunnels til your can controls good. catch a lot of handstyles WITH PAINT. learn how to use a can, after all, graffiti is about fuckin painting.
negative space meaning big areas in between the letters... try to either bring the letters closer or make the 3d big enough to where it covers that open space, look at the big boy blackbook thread for some inspiration...
Merta exchange View attachment 590323 Halloween piece. crits? View attachment 590324 crits: primitive: i see the style you are trying to do. try drawing bigger, i find it to be easier if you draw that kind of style bigger exi: what your bars, you are placing them in awkward places. and work on flow. if one letter has bends, all the others should too.
[Broken External Image]:http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/774/fall116.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/8457/fall117.jpg added some bricks to finish the full page one's background , and finished up the other one tonight Factor i would fatten up that bar on the t , but good work overall kuake you gotta make your bars even man , look at these pics i am posting , they are a good example of even bars
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definitely intermediate at least retro... i like that second to last one AND the last one a lot.... niggle got style
Yo Retro your shit is Fire bro! Lovin your posts a lot man... Hit me up if you are down for an exchange.. Smoke Exchange
something new for halloween im not done, but actually i think imma scrap this one and restart from scratch and fix things. [Broken External Image]:http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00280.jpg
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Chill out with the jiggedy Jaggedy shit you got going on with the "L"... The "F" is by far the best letter on here... Work off of that
w g o n e- thanks for the crits, i thought my bars were even though? blacktodafuture- yeah, I'm just starting to go from really simp to curves and bends and pulls etc. and it's hard for me to do it to all of them.
kuake the bars really arent even... like the top right of ur K's.... and the bottom right too for that matter, also the left bar of the E in this one is about as uneven as it gets... View attachment 590454 itll help if u draw out each bar individually... just like meyor did here, thats why his bars are all even and shit... naaaaw'mean? View attachment 590455