i like that bottom pencil S a lot, just fix the widths a little. the extension on the E and D look bad. looks like youve got simples down pretty well though, now instead of adding weird curvy extensions to plain straight letters try to just bend and angle the bars. dont put any extensions and dont change the bars from your simples, just angle them and possibly bend them slightly. not like that first D though, make it a smooth curve instead of a sharp angle. play around with your bars until you get somethin decent to work with. youre on your way though
SED- nice simp and what made you choose a three letter word?? usually just crews ian- looks cool but those stars are a no go i think sort of ruins it i know my size is off on the G and shit but im working on this sort of style now
pointman, I dont really know what made me choose it, ill probably change it once i get the letters down and can actually paint it for a while. might change to SAID, but not any time soon. and for your throw i would just work on that S a bit.
dont liek your W, and some your bars real screwy like at bottom of E. Arrow on W is wack, Random bar going into R is weird
Werm i think they pretty much nailed the big things the only thing i can say is keep it up and maybe do something different with the bottom of the last bar on your M If this peice isnt good enough ima go back to scratch and work on simps ik the 3D is off in some spots but besides that crits please?
sorry but no you and pure start over keyboard style letters you dont just start out in wild style that has to develop over a long time small development at a time.
yes... he means scrap everything you know about writing graff, and start from the beggining... its not cold, it is simply how one developes a "better" style
M's and W's actually have slight different base structure M's are straighter where as W's have angled lines.... but essentially upside are the same... @ekaf E to K connection is wack. You still need to work on perfecting your bars
dude im lovin that...pretty fresh. If your uo for it ill exchange wit you. Any crits on this ballpoint freestyle?