Millix: Not simple enough and your alphabets are wiggly and inconsistant. Straighten them up and keep'em even. see the "new to graffiti" thread for tips and tricks.

 

Untitled by grinder13, on Flickr

 

I wish I had been a teenager in '82.
Here's some shit

 

the best thing about that piece is that it's on a celing tile. straight up im stealin that idea haha. as for crits id say get rid of most if not all of the extensions, since alot of them come out of nowhere and serve no purpose. bars could use some work but aren't that bad. overall i like it .

and centry that piece is sick but sams are shit. smoke phillies.

 

thanks an i dont think i can get phillies here lol there for sams!

 

phillie and owl rippa i been a willy for a while nigguh!

 

Another attempt.

 

1st one was better.

and lol that sucks man. where i live in canada they have phillies in every convenience store. only thing i can never find is swishers. its a fuckin tragedy

 

All we have around here is swishers lmfao.

 

you owe your friend a new tile!... jk but that Y looks more like a 4 and lose the arrows... 1 is ok but 7 is to much in my eyes but nice color...

 

Fasho, thanks man. There are a handful of letters I need to familiarize myself with a bit more. But yeah, my hand is way too fucking shakey.

 

bars my dude

 

i just randomly dropped this shit... havent done too many simps or anything but this doesnt look too bad

 

move your hand in a quicker less tense movement ... your lines are shakey because you trying real hard and drawing super slow

 

hmm..dont think so

 

heres some canvasses i did, with some collabs

 

2nd to last is the best, dude u did it with scrapes on you

 

last one for now. The L could be better, and the E could be a little more symmetrical to the S, but other than that, this is an improvement right?

 

debut your planets need more letter structure