personally feeling the bottom one, but the E's seem inconsistent - same with the top one.

but, do what feels right

 

I like the top one 2 paint sed

 

both are damn good. I like the top one, but feel it's missing something. paint both

 

crits please... little throw i played around with.....

 

Thank you Skrillex and Rhymesayers crits please?

 

Bottom one flows better sede.

 

Thanks dude. it actually turns out as a pretty sick piece that you can even keep to a small sheet if necessary.

 

it's done

 

Jiska: Came out dope as fuck.

S33on3: Get on some Chestplate records shit. Props on Rhymesayers though. The top one is cleaner. The bottom one is a good concept, but need a little work. Just needs some cleaning up. I want it licking an icecream cone with that box by it's tounge and the truck above it.

 

@Asis Too hard to read.

Finally got my new markers
fucked up when trying some highlights then my white marker dripped on the C, just ignore that if possible



Edit: and another

 

as cred said, its too hard 2 read, it dosen't realy flow, and the letters r round and u did your shadows square?

 

New to Bombing Science, heres a throwie ive been working on, let me how you think it can be improved, peace.

 

make the arrow lines all flow in the same direction, make the cut on the "S" round not straight and do the shadow on the exclamation point...but nice work, like the style. keep posting

 

Bored yesterday started messing around with another name MERSA View attachment 622138 View attachment 622139

 

@ cred and @ jiksa - thanks guys. ill keep goin with it..been tryin some different things with it lately at work. have new flicks posted once I get home

 

i say, don't do the arrows. they make it look even more toy

 

thanx man that bottom one was actually used with pen ink and a brush it was a technique that i used for school. I got the ice cream truck from the Bangerang Skrillex music video thanks for the advice

 

@Asis Yeah don't sweat it man, just keep sketchin away.