I don't think that deserves to be on your sig Mues. And thanks for backin me up ^ it's always the 12th somewhere

 

this is my first piece so any help would be appreciated. thanks.

 

@Noted, okay we all make the mistake of trying to do more than we're capable of when starting out.

What you gotta realise is that Graffiti is about progression.

First you need to learn the basic structure of letters. Forget all the arrows and extensions, just get the basic letters down, do a "simple"

Do that a million and one times and eventually style will come to your letters.

 

^This, not like they listen though.

 

made this one for Naked.. i know i probably shouldve gone simpiler but whatever. haha.

 

@shitouttaluck @saltire
umm, heres a throwup i did. its a bit sloppy because i rushed. i held the camera retarded so i rotated it, it looks like i wrote diagonally, but i seriously wrote straight. i listen to crits.

 

@Lyfer swagginn. that Hips looks so fresh. Flows so well.
@Skiz don't do that wavy line stuff, makes your letters look like flubber.

tweaking and refining, this is the first R i have ever actually been satisfied with ever. (thank god i dont have to say that about the D)

 

@noted i dont know how new you are to graffiti and stuff like that but you should read the "New to Graffiti" thread here http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-The-New-To-Graffiti-Thread if u wanna try and learn and get better at your pieces. u dont have to read like the rules and stuff but even just look at the pictures that people posted... look at how simple they are starting out. its all about practice and progression

@cred alright thanks for the tip.. i was just goin fast and its easier for me to do them wavy like that then basic letters believe it or not. haha

 

yo Cred that new stuff id gonna look crazy after some tweaks and ink

 

@skiz of course man, that's what i'm aiming for. i just need to grab tips and crits to improve, know what i mean? aside from the attempted peice, how about my throwup? i rushed it a bit but do you think it's alright? crit it!

 

That C to R connection is fucking wonky. And that's bad. Cool E though but you're losing your structure.

 

4 my girl mona. crits (ill geta better camera soon)

 

i didnt know it was that bad but it was before i read about all the start simple stuff but thanks for the feedback

and to Norfsuthr were you being sarcastic?

 

cred those extensions are wack
mues where ever your last post was, that mues is looking tight

 

mues, whats with your hard on for the letter D? it's kinda freaking me out a bit

 

Bahahah, nah man, people talking about the letter d make sound like they want the dick! Probably gonna delete them though, takes up too much space.

And thanks dank.

 

@Dempo i'm digging that shit. nice work.

the yellow is neon but the camera made it look like piss...

 

this is decent cred^, bigger bar one the top of the e