says YOU trying something simpler Naked - i like that simple Hick94 - good color scheme Dankbudz - nice drips
yo real_lyfe_dyke, you shouldn't give crits either. id actually say Zeek has more crit authority than you... its official kilroy-id like that if it didn't have those, i think its call serifs.. the extensions and such, but thats just me. you should fatten the right of the U and bring it in more with a nice lil curve. hard to describe cuz I'm retarded. BUT also the left bar on the Y just isn't fitting in with what you got. and that bar that goes through the U should be cut
@Killroy: Go a little simpler, the letters and extensions don't really flow naturally yet. Furthermore, don't use such hard lines while you're sketching. Let your pencil flow over the paper multiple times and find the right curves/lines that way. This looks way too forced to me. After that, you can draw a bit harder line over that right curve or line, or ink it if you want (which would be better, because you'll need to practice that anyway). Once you do that, make sure that you draw each curve or line in one fluid motion in order to prevent shaky lines and 'knots.'
that you is on the right track but the left side of the Y is wack and the U has horrid letter structure
Fair enough, I've accepted my toy status as of late. Not trying to start beef, gotta attempt to defend myself I suppose though....
If you're serious about anything, all you can do is listen to and learn from people that are better than you and practice practice practice.
alright so I made a few changes thanks to your crits. but that E is screwed I would really like to try and get this name to flow too.
Yeash, thats actually pretty good too but what humor said for now keep that stuff level. Humor that handstyle thing at the bottom is pretty nice. but i say you H in the piece got too much jazz goin on and the R is a bit funky but good job on that one keep it up
how would i spell naked without these letters? Haha just kidding, I like the style but you know me i mix it up...