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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. s33on3

    s33on3 Senior Member

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  2. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Like the piece, not really feeling the extra bars on the first S tho, dont know a lot about adding extra bars tho so feel free to ignore me lol
     
  3. s33on3

    s33on3 Senior Member

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  4. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    Nother for Mues. Not sure about this one, lost a a lot of the letter form when i filled it

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  5. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    You did. The e is almost completely lost. Has potential and that color scheme is one of my favorites. You do a great job of giving your pieces depth with shadows and such. That alone can make simple letters look amazing.
     
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  6. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    :D *WOOT* Senior Member *WOOT* :D


    Here are some stickers, trying to get more writers to from my area to come on this website :)

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  7. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    holy fuck please go die somewhere dark lonely and cold.

    anyway...
    cred- no me gusta your connections, extensions and those million little curves in every letter anddd your letter structure itself.
    with that said, you can at least color and use a pencil well, which is a plus cause then you can cover up everything stated above
     
  8. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    ^ word I think he has a mixture of down syndrome and parkinsons ... those are handstyles (tags) bro not blackbook shit. You need to do a lot of research and learning before you pick up a pencil,marker,can or anything.
     
  9. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Or making videos...
     
  10. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    hahaha and cred that reminds me of toothpaste.
     
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  12. Spy10327

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    Interesting piece I did a while back. constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.
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  13. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    ...
    Pretty sure the name Fate's already taken. Also not really much need to date your stuff. To the new to graffiti thread with you.
     
  14. H1P30N3R

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  15. kwu

    kwu Senior Member

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    lol do the writers from your area exude as much faggotry as you?
     
  16. REAL_LYFE_MIKE

    REAL_LYFE_MIKE Banned

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    bwahhh
     
  17. Spy10327

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    No one near me writes Fate, and also I've had another name that i wrote for a long time, not quite new to graffiti, just new to using sharpies instead of deco colors since I'm banned from almost every art store in town by now. besides that wasn't constructive criticism. what don't you like about it?
     
  18. cred1384

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    It was constructive, I'm trying to be nice here.
    For what you should work on:
    Don't do those weird feather things around the outside. Looks wack.
    Your 3d or drop shadow (cant tell which you were going for) is off.
    Don't overlap your A like that
    The capital T with the lowercase f a e is strange.

    Please don't take this as me being cruel. You asked for constructive criticism and now you know what not to do. Shit you can ignore me if you really want. Frankly i don't care.
     
  19. Spy10327

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    Aight, I feel you on those points. I'll work on a few more right now
     
  20. Coleo

    Coleo Elite Member

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